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Old 02-23-2004, 07:45 PM
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He could sweep you off your feet with one word

make you quiver inside by a simple soft touch to the face
in any case you will find yourself drawn to him
wanting to run to him
cling to him
fall in his arms cause with him you feel no harm
you feel safe
free
but yet in disbelief that he is real

he could make you punch a steel wall with your bare hands
make you think your the hulk man and is able to punch through it
but in 10 secs you start to feel it,..... the pain in your hand
this man has you wishing you can be able to lay your life down and end it all
and not in up going down into the burning ground due to taking your life into your own hands
see his tactic is to befriend you, get in to you, use you, then screw you
and you look at yourself and see your reflection and question who are you?

he could make you stand tall and never fall to the words of the damned
have you singing "yes I can be who I want to be......what I want to be.."
by him simply believing and supporting your strength within the
you find yourself achieving, and succeeding,
soon believing strongly in thyself

he could make u switch and sway your hips
have you curl at your toe tips
sweat bull-ets
and feel mag-ni-fi-cent
just from the simple caress of his fin-ger-tips
he could twirl your hair and have you swear your the little 1st grade girl giggling and swinging high in the air
just by his stare
his glare
your mesmerized
feeling fine
divine...............


and then u realize that it's only in your mind
"this guy"
and soon you pop up
open eyes
rise and shine it's morning time
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Old 02-23-2004, 08:15 PM
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Re: He could sweep you off your feet with one word

that poem was off the chain I give you much props. Currently I am in an english class and the teacher said we could read anything we wanted. ONLY WITH YOUR PERMISSION will I read it. I am asking if you wouldn't mind if I read and of course attribution(your credit) would go to you
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Old 02-24-2004, 06:46 AM
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Re: He could sweep you off your feet with one word

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that poem was off the chain I give you much props. Currently I am in an english class and the teacher said we could read anything we wanted. ONLY WITH YOUR PERMISSION will I read it. I am asking if you wouldn't mind if I read and of course attribution(your credit) would go to you
trus me dats cool
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Old 03-03-2004, 02:32 PM
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good poem man! keep up the good work.
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Old 03-12-2004, 11:12 PM
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sweet heartfelt words, well put together
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ahhhhhhhhhh...mi all wan bwal
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real deep poem devotional words.
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Old 06-06-2005, 01:22 PM
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passionate.... intellectual.... beautiful..... Nice job!!!
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