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Old 09-04-2005, 05:22 PM
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Raise my hand.......

There is a lesson to be learn from this, I hope all knows the truth
about the power of CHrist in your life!



Raise my hand…….




I never knew that when the teacher told if I raise my hand,
I would receive the attention I deserve. (6th grade)


16 years later and year after I took in my wife,
I thank GOD for her being in my life.
So why does our so called powerful love has
Obstacles like my shoulders at 45 degrees,
Elbow slightly bent, hand imitates black power,
but my destination is my wife face.
Yeah, I got my attention, not to mention
Me hitting her,
Tired of swinging left submission,
Hard days at work forced un-call for missions,
Wife hear force in voice over cell phone,
Leaves her with plotting and thinking,
Wishing of quick way from me she is exiting,
Children crying cause mommy is hurting.
Hurting, from daddy doing the hurting.
Wanting to take mommy side,
but daddy threatens to have there hide.
Night battles, make ups with forceful seduction,
Sayings like I'm sorry, this will never happen again,
Next day a bad day at work, come home found
You burned a hole in designer shirt
Greetings were kiss of fist meetings,
Led to wife healings from heavy drinkings,
Plotting for revenge, started saving ends
Thought of hiring 20 mens
Keys came close to scratching my benz!
Until one day, striking your head left you dayum
Near dead,
Crying is you, while you fall to your knees,
Why you repeating your sorrys to your apologies,
When sorry is not what you mean.
Your father was abusive,
Your learned what he did,
and learned from his father did,
So fallen to your knees for wifey,
Should had been a fall on knees to
call on HE.
HE revived my wife, change my life,
She allow me another try,
Now when I raise my hand it only goes up high,
I reach for the sky, for mighty power that gave you back to me,
Life is better, mentally, physically and spiritually!

I raise my hand, but only to GOD!
I touch her face to caress it,
not to mess with it!
I'm new......

Thank you LORD,
and Thank you my beautiful woman
you are truly one!
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Old 09-04-2005, 05:59 PM
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Re: Raise my hand.......

oohhh wow. i enjoyed this a whole alot ** holding back tears**
where did this come from, is any of it true?
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Old 09-04-2005, 10:22 PM
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pretty powerful stuff TTNU, good ONE again respects.
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Old 09-04-2005, 10:52 PM
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Re: Raise my hand.......

D1. always seem to be the one on response. I'll be sure you get a copy of my CD coming in Oct, I hope. Its called "Twistnwords"! I can't wait to drop it myself.

Much respects to you my friend!


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pretty powerful stuff TTNU, good ONE again respects.
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thank you TTNU, looking forward to it, it will be a cd to help me in a passive contentive mood @ work when the chips are down.
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Don't play it too loud, the woman, dem may come running to you to fix dem
leaky faucet if they here this CD. LOL


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thank you TTNU, looking forward to it, it will be a cd to help me in a passive contentive mood @ work when the chips are down.
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damn ur so real and i love it twist - wish u all the success u deserve....
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Re: Raise my hand.......

Such depth to you, my love.... You take my breath away in more ways than one. Until next time.... XXOO
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Don't play it too loud, the woman, dem may come running to you to fix dem
leaky faucet if they here this CD. LOL
i can imagine that, but i'll play it safe @ jel's crib is where it will be heard lol.
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Words like my piece will put a little ummph in your dip!



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i can imagine that, but i'll play it safe @ jel's crib is where it will be heard lol.
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This piece will be read on tonights show. Internet Radio, Citizen Broadcasting, Social Media Podcasts - Blog Talk Radio 8pm-10pm
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