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Old 08-16-2005, 06:00 PM
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Arrow I thought it would work.

I gave up a true love for you
because I thought it would work
You were too old for me but I didn't care
because I thought it would work
I disobeyed my parents for you
because I thought it would work
All in All I never really loved you
I guess I was with you for the thrill
You raped me and called me names
but I didn't see the truth
because I thought it would work
We argue and you call me disrespectful
Honey, it isn't disrespectful until mi tell
yu bout under yu next gal!
I never said a word when you commented or stared at other girls
because I was foolish enough to think it would work.
Yu fool! Yu idiot! Yu tink sey mi need yu!
Yu want a man give yu 10 r@s$ kick!
Dats why mi dun leave yu already
but yu still a look mi.
You called me a whore and a $lut.
Yu see how yu damn face favor a mongrel dawg weh have AIDS!
Mi did deh wid yu cuz mi pity yu!
Yu ole' wrench yu!
Di likkle loving weh yu get neva come from mi heart.
You are a waste of my precious tears!
Mi did juss want yu money!
Dats all yu did good fah because yu sure as hell neva mek mi cum!
Yu need fi move and gweh yu ole' dawg!
Gwan back inna di hole weh you come from!
Idiot bwoy no ramp wid mi!
Mi woulda tell yu bout yu parts
but di God inna me won't allow mi to.
Mi nuh hate yu.
Mi juss dispise and dislike yu!
Mi nuh want yu!
Stop ring off mi damn phone!
Yu dun out!
Yu damn parasite!
Yu wah fling weh and dash out!
Your the devil's advocate!
What a fool I was to think it would work.

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Old 08-16-2005, 09:54 PM
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Re: I thought it would work.

very Nice And Deep Hotness. [and Not The Way Your Thinking]
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Old 08-17-2005, 08:07 PM
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Re: I thought it would work.

Thanks puppetmaster. And NO I wasnt thinking that way until you said something. This is really based on reality. This happened to me.
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Old 08-17-2005, 10:14 PM
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Re: I thought it would work.

nyce ONE hotness, it show's the sacrifice that was made, and there's a message in the story.
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Old 08-18-2005, 04:30 AM
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Re: I thought it would work.

Nice piece!
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Old 08-27-2005, 10:47 AM
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Re: I thought it would work.

Tell im again hotness!
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Old 08-28-2005, 09:31 AM
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Re: I thought it would work.

Let it out girl! i been there too ....because i thought it would work.....
i had 2 kids to tha son of ****** NOW IM FREE but boy did i waste my years.....remember what ur truly worthy of hotness someone who appreciates ur HOTNESS! bless u
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