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Old 07-26-2005, 11:19 AM
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Turn away and move on

This place in my heart is no longers yours,
life has no fulfillment,
you are no longer needed your time here has exceeded.
This bed has no two sides, only room for one.
My thoughts of you, are history,
well beyond the past.
If you see me by accident,
turn away and let me pass.
Move on...
I need not to change my phone,
or move to a new home to escape seeing you,

Just turn away, walk away,
you make me naucious with thought of being with you!
Your chance was given,
but after three times, it hurts more
for me to stand the thought of living.

Sacrifices were only little when I be-little myself
in front of my friends,
protected your wrongs against my family,
cheated and lied to GOD about your sins!

You took every bit of the meaning of being a man
from me.
You broke me down, until the skys were grounds of
hell over me!

I lost myself, financially, physically, mentally and spiritually.
With all this stripped, you dare stand before me!
Murder would have been a good line of work for you to go in,
cause you killed me inside long ago when my body was
just a walking dwelling,
a broken down zombie.

My foundations are ruins, stripped of color,
dark with never seeing light,
numb, without ever moving foreward,
mute, without ever knowing the truth.
And because of you, every word, would be
falsely true!

You make hell look heavenly,
How does it feel to be you,
Oh I know,
just scrape off the gum and ****
that sticks under my shoe.

If you see me with another..
Turn away and move on.
If you here this on the radio,
Please...
Turn away..
and move on!

In fact.....

You stay right there,
I'll turn away

And move on!
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Old 07-26-2005, 11:25 AM
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Re: Turn away and move on

Wooooowwww.....
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Old 07-26-2005, 12:05 PM
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Re: Turn away and move on

WOW is right......

That isn't your usual sexy seduction Twisty...... I don't know what to think now.....

I have to go ponder. Still, nice piece, very nice and very sad.
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Old 07-26-2005, 01:27 PM
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respect TTNU NYCE ONE.
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Old 07-26-2005, 03:06 PM
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Re: Turn away and move on

Thanks all. Just wanted to go a different route. Plus I'm stuck on the erotic part of me! No ventures!
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Old 07-26-2005, 04:47 PM
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Aw, that was really nice & sad Good work TTNU!
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Old 07-26-2005, 05:26 PM
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Re: Turn away and move on

Quote:
Originally Posted by tonguetwistnu
This place in my heart is no longers yours,
life has no fulfillment,
you are no longer needed your time here has exceeded.
This bed has no two sides, only room for one.
My thoughts of you, are history,
well beyond the past.
If you see me by accident,
turn away and let me pass.
Move on...
I need not to change my phone,
or move to a new home to escape seeing you,

Just turn away, walk away,
you make me naucious with thought of being with you!
Your chance was given,
but after three times, it hurts more
for me to stand the thought of living.

Sacrifices were only little when I be-little myself
in front of my friends,
protected your wrongs against my family,
cheated and lied to GOD about your sins!

You took every bit of the meaning of being a man
from me.
You broke me down, until the skys were grounds of
hell over me!

I lost myself, financially, physically, mentally and spiritually.
With all this strip, you dare stand before me!
Murder would have been a good line of work for you to go in,
cause you killed me inside long ago when my body was
just a walking dwelling,
a broken down zombie.

My foundations are ruins, stripped of color,
dark with never seeing light,
numb, without ever moving foreward,
mute, without ever knowing the truth.
And because of you, every word, would be
falsely true!

You make hell look heavenly,
I does it feel to be you,
Oh I know,
just scrape off the gum and ****
that sticks under my shoe.

If you see me with another..
Turn away and move on.
If you here this on the radio,
Please...
Turn away..
and move on!

In fact.....

You stay right there,
I'll turn away

And move on!
Wow, Twisty Baby...This is a winner, good work.
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Old 07-27-2005, 09:31 AM
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Re: Turn away and move on

Coming from you my prayers have been answered. Always the light that guides me, always, SUNSERIE!


Quote:
Originally Posted by sunserie
Wow, Twisty Baby...This is a winner, good work.
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I LOVE THIS... My God I can relate this so much its not even funny. I think I feel tears coming on. Wow Twisty. That was really nice. Trust me. Muy Bien.<<<<<a little spanish for ya...............
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Old 08-22-2005, 07:32 PM
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Bien! Gracias, senorita Caliente-ness. I do what I can do! Brava, Brava!
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Old 08-23-2005, 05:08 PM
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Yu Dun Kno...... Muy Caliente Deh Right Yah So!!!!!!
Mi Nuff Don't It?
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Re: Turn away and move on

Twist u wrote my exact feelings for my ex-husband BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO
damn i luuuuurve your work
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this is to the point !!
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Old 12-29-2006, 11:07 AM
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Re: Turn away and move on

Quote:
Originally Posted by tonguetwistnu View Post
This place in my heart is no longers yours,
life has no fulfillment,
you are no longer needed your time here has exceeded.
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Just turn away, walk away,
you make me naucious with thought of being with you!

Excellently painful Tongues - as always!

Might make the bits I've cut out part of my new siggy!!
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Re: Turn away and move on

i'll always love his words....
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