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Old 05-25-2005, 08:38 PM
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My Caribbean Sun

He reminds me of hot days in the Caribbean sun

cool waters, coconut trees

the sweet sounds of tropical birds

flowing gracefully in tune with the breeze

I can taste him, like sweet sour sop

ripe mangoes, pawpaw and pineapple

drooling to suck his lips, I won't stop

until they melt in my mouth like guinep and star apple

His skin..a product of the Theobroma cacao tree

Like food of the Gods, his cocoa skin entices me

to taste his sweet chocolate, his sun kiss shade

as we lay in a hammock, and watch the Caribbean sun fade

his eyes light up like stars, in the black sky at night

brightening my life...his glowing eyes, like stars...priceless lights

Even if he was poor, in a concrete or wooden house..barred up door

sleeping on a sponge mattress, on the floor

pinching the kerosene oil in his lamp during the blackouts

I would share every struggle with him...never to walk out

Dancing to Beres Hammond...as our bodies sway

to the tune....''remember those days when we use to rock away''

Him picking red hibiscus flowers, placing it my curly hair

me teasing him with my sexy walk, knowing he will stare

I want to live free.....be me....with him....us...forever

in love...floating like two swimmers in turquoise waters

Living life to the fullest, it's best...together we will run

into a future as bright as my Caribbean sun....



(C) 2005
Me.... YTM
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Old 07-03-2005, 11:38 PM
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Re: My Caribbean Sun

nice ONE mystic, reminds me of my ex in jamdown.
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