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Old 03-24-2005, 09:44 AM
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You Still here with me (miss you dad)

A old poem for a missed friend!


Looking at the mirror, I still say Good morning to you,
though you are not here, my reflection is that of you,
I dress up nicely and put on the smell goods,
reminding me of your up keeps and cleansiness,
I cook breakfast and dinners and smell perfection,
of a good chef cooking for his family,
Own a luxury car, just like your style,
you had style, so I smile at that gift,
and when I smile, you smile back,
mirror still projects your image and not mine.
Its hard being called by your first and last name,
I still look around to see if you would answer when you're called.
I see the pride in your eyes when I'm in uniform,
the same pride you carried when you are wearing yours.
The only reason I could be a good father,
Well, look down on me, you don't need a explanation,
its the pass on to offspring from generation to
generation.
Though every 24th of March your birth,
every 16th of October your leaving,
I still cry to this day, 15 years and counting.
Some pray on the father,
but I pray to you father, as your serve the highest
positions with the higher FATHER.
I know you and LeRoy Sr are very proud of LeRoy 3rd.
I even have the talent you have in poetry, that thing
you pass down to me.
This will be read to millions, heard by more.
We all wish you happy birthday and many more.
Your still here with me..
some that know you, can still see it,
some that see me then will believe it,
the things I do, they say thats your dad doing that,
I live with pride, I love until I cry,
I miss you with hurt inside,
to still see you,
through my watery eyes
You are Still Here with Me.......
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Old 03-24-2005, 09:52 AM
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Re: Happy Birthday Dad

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You Still here with me (miss you dad)

A old poem for a missed friend!


Looking at the mirror, I still say Good morning to you,
though you are not here, my reflection is that of you,
I dress up nicely and put on the smell goods,
reminding me of your up keeps and cleansiness,
I cook breakfast and dinners and smell perfection,
of a good chef cooking for his family,
Own a luxury car, just like your style,
you had style, so I smile at that gift,
when I smile, you smile back,
mirror still projects your image and not mine.
Its hard being called by your first and last name,
I still look around to see if you would answer
when you're called.
I see the pride in your eyes when I'm in uniform,
the same pride you carried when wearing yours.
The only reason I am a good father,
Well, look down on me, you don't need a explanation,
its the pass on to offspring from generation to
generation.
Though every 24th of March your birth,
every 16th of October your leaving,
I still cry to this day, 11 years and counting.
Some pray on the father,
but I pray to you father, as your serve the highest
positions with the higher FATHER.
I know you and LeRoy Sr are very proud of LeRoy 3rd.
I even have the talent you have in poetry, that thing
you pass down to me.
This will be read to millions, heard by more.
We all wish you happy birthday and many more.
Your still here with me..
some that know you, can still see it,
some that see me and then believe it,
the things I do, they say thats your dad doing that,
I live with pride, I love until I cry,
I miss you with hurt inside,
I still see you,
You are Still Here with Me.......
Aww......so sweet Tongues...
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Old 03-24-2005, 10:09 AM
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Re: Happy Birthday Dad

Awwww tongues, this is nice. Very touching.
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Re: Happy Birthday Dad

that was beautiful yet sadness fell upon my heart for you it was so deep that i could almost feel your pain.i'm so sorry for your loss,it doesn't matter how long since your father passed away the pain is always there ,although time helps you to deal with the pain the best way you know how.
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Re: Happy Birthday Dad

Awwww....Twisty, that was touching. I feel you and your cherished memories
of your Father. You are a proud marvelous reflection of the man you speak so dearly of and to.

Although I do not personally know him, I know of him through his great son who took this time to share someone so dear to his heart with us.

"Happy Birthday to you!
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Old 03-24-2005, 07:48 PM
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Re: Happy Birthday Dad

Thanks luv for being ontime like you do!
Thanks HS you got me love!
Thanks Catherine. I'm doing on the radio tonight so
you guys got it first.

Thanks Sun, its been a while. Miss you love!

Peace all!
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Dayum its still hard! I miss you dad!
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So many years later and I still miss you.
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Re: Happy Birthday Dad

Tre'... I love it that you had such a wonderful relationship with your father....

God Bless you and him....
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Happy Birthday Dad! Miss you
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