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Old 02-22-2005, 12:37 PM
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i shall put in the box

i shall put into the box
the sea crashing on the shore
the soft fabric of a teddy bear.
i shall put into the box
a pot of gold from the end of a
colourful rainbow
and a star from the dark sky.
i shall put into the box
a strawberry and a sweet
and a wish that will last forever.

this is a poem my 10yr old daughter henna wrote which i thought was sweet and i wanted to share it with you.with hennas permition of course.lol
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Old 02-22-2005, 12:46 PM
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i shall put into the box
the sea crashing on the shore
the soft fabric of a teddy bear.
i shall put into the box
a pot of gold from the end of a
colourful rainbow
and a star from the dark sky.
i shall put into the box
a strawberry and a sweet
and a wish that will last forever.

this is a poem my 10yr old daughter henna wrote which i thought was sweet and i wanted to share it with you.with hennas permition of course.lol
lovely poem henna. cat your spelling is out a little lol.lindsayxxxxxxxxxx
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Old 02-22-2005, 12:51 PM
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i shall put into the box
the sea crashing on the shore
the soft fabric of a teddy bear.
i shall put into the box
a pot of gold from the end of a
colourful rainbow
and a star from the dark sky.
i shall put into the box
a strawberry and a sweet
and a wish that will last forever.

this is a poem my 10yr old daughter henna wrote which i thought was sweet and i wanted to share it with you.with hennas permition of course.lol
Awwww nice poem.
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Old 02-22-2005, 12:58 PM
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lovely poem henna. cat your spelling is out a little lol.lindsayxxxxxxxxxx
ok clever clogs where?
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ok clever clogs where?
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Awwww nice poem.
henna said thankyou she was glad that you liked it.xxxx
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Old 02-22-2005, 05:24 PM
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now that's what i call a young,clever,poet.....beautiful...
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now that's what i call a young,clever poet.....beautiful...
ah toya you have made my little hennas day she is well chuffed she told me to say thankyou to you...xxxxxxxxxx
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