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Old 12-22-2004, 05:40 PM
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Temptations

You’re always on my mind and I’m thinking about you

I don’t know what to do,

I have someone at home but you did something to me

It feel’s so right but I know it’s wrong, because I’ve got someone

All that you can give me; I get at home and more

I never thought that I, could feel this way

For the first time I’ve lost control of me, what have you done?

You got me questioning what I believed in

Why did you have to look at me the way you did

Your eyes called you out, they told me how you felt;

They told of your lust, and your wanting me.

This is crazy!

But what the hell are you doing in my dreams?

I was warned about these things,

I thought I would be strong enough but right at this moment I am weak

I’ve got too much to loose to let you in

You got me anticipating the next time that I’ll see you

You are like a secret, which I must know

I have to resist this because it is wrong and you and I know this

The bible speaks of temptations but I never thought it could be so cruel

How can I want you for myself when I belong to another?

I know what I must do.

There can’t be three, there is only room for two
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Old 12-22-2004, 05:46 PM
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Re: Temptations

Hmmm.....

Mi aggo tell!!
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Old 12-22-2004, 05:49 PM
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Re: Temptations

Nice HP But
[font size = 20]MR.PYEEEEEEEEEE,come fi yu ooman!!!![font size = 20]
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Question, how do you all know this is about ME is there some clue in this piece, ok well besides that fact that you all know that there is a Mr.Pye in my life, and the woman in this poem is in a commited relationship, why do you think I am writing about myself hmmmmm ?
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Question, how do you all know this is about ME is there some clue in this piece?
Hi don't need heny clues...HIT HIS HABOUT YOU.

and i will be telling your HUSBAND that you are planning to give him APPLE PIE!
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Hi don't need heny clues...HIT HIS HABOUT YOU.

and i will be telling your HUSBAND that you are planning to give him APPLE PIE!
Apple Pie with whipped cream on top
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Question, how do you all know this is about ME is there some clue in this piece, ok well besides that fact that you all know that there is a Mr.Pye in my life, and the woman in this poem is in a commited relationship, why do you think I am writing about myself hmmmmm ?
because I KNOW THIS!!!!!!!!!!lmao
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Re: Temptations

Well there was alot of emotion in this work. Poets can see this.
Just pray cause a one night of lust is a lifetime of destruction.
Why live on a statue when you have a monument at home.
Anticipation will make you want that person even if it is one time.
Your curiousity will be cravings. Turn your head and live your dreams.
Cause even if you think about it, you have already sinned!
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Well there was alot of emotion in this work. Poets can see this.
Just pray cause a one night of lust is a lifetime of destruction.
Why live on a statue when you have a monument at home.
Anticipation will make you want that person even if it is one time.
Your curiousity will be cravings. Turn your head and live your dreams.
Cause even if you think about it, you have already sinned!
Nice responce ER, very nice indeed
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Re: Temptations

Well have you ever had the temptation to post another pic before the year is out????? MAybe for a hot second???
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Well have you ever had the temptation to post another pic before the year is out????? MAybe for a hot second???
lol lol lol I think I'm strong enough to resist that temptation lol lol
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Though there was alot of emotion in this poem this was not to insinuate an affair of any sort. This was just a poem !
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Old 12-23-2004, 04:29 PM
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It was a deep temtation that has once been felt by I and I had to ova come it and let it pass. Mi neva looked back again...This was nice HP
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Re: Temptations

HP: don't forget...

"don't give no bun I you cyant tek bak bun."

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HP: don't forget...

"don't give no bun I you cyant tek bak bun."

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Don't worry no bun giving here
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