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Old 10-15-2009, 04:19 PM
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Swaylah nah do too bad.
Swaylah Profound

They're lusting for this bust
Plush with succulence.
A mind they don't see
Can't see due to her love.
A love they can't respect, Just for what it is.
Her knowledge is power, She took care of his.
She cries, babies whine
How will she manage
To raise such spirits, without causing damage.
Far too much for a nigga's petty worth
She knew she'd take care of her breed from her birth.
Times of frustration anger and hate
That cat brought her down to what was now her fate
Moments of soul searching
Digging deep with in
Dodging them serpents and confessing her sins
Building all fresh...
Foundation is strong
Recognizing her mistakes and righting her wrongs
Ace in her pocket
Wisdom planted from youth
Third eye is wide open
All she see is the truth!!


An Original Work.....Swaylah Smith
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Old 10-15-2009, 04:22 PM
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Re: Swaylah Profound

niceness!!!

welcome to ETJ

we love the word!
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Old 10-15-2009, 04:28 PM
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Nice Peom.

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Old 10-15-2009, 04:49 PM
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Re: Swaylah Profound

Conscious lyrics indeed.....welcome to ETJ!!! I write spoken word also..not very much only when I am in the mood.
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Old 10-16-2009, 09:50 AM
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Thank you all for your warm welcome! Have been checking ETJ out for a while, and you all have a nice community thing here! I do enjoy! Again thank you for the welcome! Much Respect!

@ Abiyah Tehila... I love the spoken word. I agree you have to be in a mood to write. A good way to transgress!!!Putting thoughts and feelings into words...maybe i'll write a book someday! Have a blessed day folks!
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