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Old 07-24-2009, 11:04 AM
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If love is a Crime I plead Guilty

“GUILTY OF LOVE”

As I sit here and ponder on all the thoughts we shared one thing that sealed our love was that we both agreed that we would protect what we have

All those nights we stayed up til the wee hours of the morning making love on da phone it was a mental stimulation of epic proportions that I have never ever known

I felt with every fiber of my being that we were off to a great start like a sponge I absorbed your mental orgasms and embedded them into my heart

Our love felt so real and captivating that it remained to be seen does that phase sound familiar ahhhh yessss cuz u spoke it so often in terms of what our love would be somebody pinch me and tell me it was not a dream

The sound of your voice was sweet music to my ears I just knew without a shadow of a doubt that I would awaken to that vibration every morning for many more years

You prayed to God for a good woman a real woman you see
he answered your prayers and sent his daughter none other than me

I was your teen hood crush back in da day so U say
who would have thought that after all those years that we were apart that I would be your rib today
Now cuz of the fears you have of committing to a divine rib like me you sabotage what God has joined together
how selfish can you be

Everything you told me I believed it to be true
you was not for any foolishness or any games you say
what type of word games are you playing now with the words you say that have pushed me away when in actuality I long to stay

How many times you said that our union was an act of God
if that is true and you know Him to be real I wonder what God feels as he looks down on his daughter and see the pain she feels that's so unreal

It says in his word what God has joined together let no man separate didn't you know that vows are words we create
Anything created needs to be governed be careful what you pray for cuz you may get it all of a sudden
Ask me how I know this to be true cuz I prayed to God to send me someone whose love for me is tried and true two days later I get a call out of the blue and to my surprise it was you

With you as my prize I just knew that I had won the race
now that you have reneged on your promise to God to do right by me it's like a slap to his face

I know that we are only human and prone to error
I just pray that the karma does not last forever
Oh yes you see the universal law of cause and effect
does not discriminate we do reap what we sow don’t you know that to be true obviously not cuz u did not stay true 2 you

I refuse to believe that I was a fool to open up my heart & mind and allow you to penetrate my inner being the way that you have now this pain that I'm feelin all over again has made me sad and mad.

Now I'm like damn I know this can't be happening to me once again a voice in my head name pain sayz yes u know I am your friend. Pain and suffering I used to think was my first and last name
If true love is a game disguised as pain than in the end no one wins cuz a feeling like pain is not a game yet in da midst of it all the love I have for you remains the same.


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Old 07-24-2009, 11:10 AM
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Re: If love is a Crime I plead Guilty

This is a piece I wrote about me and my now ex-man. He decided that I was too good for him and so he wanted to break up with me. How do you leave something great and settle for a woman of a lesser caliber (for a lack of better words) than what you had.
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Old 07-24-2009, 11:14 AM
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^^...I co-sign to 'If true love is a game disguised as pain than in the end no one wins cuz a feeling like pain is not a game yet in da midst of it all the love I have for you remains the same.' ^^^

Deep, Hope this is not happening to umy friend!
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Old 07-24-2009, 11:18 AM
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^^...I co-sign to 'If true love is a game disguised as pain than in the end no one wins cuz a feeling like pain is not a game yet in da midst of it all the love I have for you remains the same.' ^^^

Deep, Hope this is not happening to umy friend!

Peace my sistah...naw this was my ex (american) man...I am now dating my friend and he is JA (first one) which led me to this site. We have been dating for about a month now and so everything is still new and fresh..we are going slow and taking it one day at a time as he knows I just came out of something. Thanks for the concern though..it is much appreciated
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Old 07-24-2009, 11:26 AM
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Peace my sistah...naw this was my ex (american) man...I am now dating my friend and he is JA (first one) which led me to this site. We have been dating for about a month now and so everything is still new and fresh..we are going slow and taking it one day at a time as he knows I just came out of something. Thanks for the concern though..it is much appreciated
No doubt! Good luck to u and yours! I have been battling mine for 3yrs!! lol
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Old 07-24-2009, 11:36 AM
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No doubt! Good luck to u and yours! I have been battling mine for 3yrs!! lol

lol...thanks...you are so crazy sis....I feel ya...much respect
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Old 07-24-2009, 11:44 AM
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lol...thanks...you are so crazy sis....I feel ya...much respect
lol,yea, that i am! I have a good man, who loves the hell out of me and my kids, but he wants to get married and have a baby. Im not having any more kids so, i feel like its unfair to him and he will either leave me or regret being with me in the end...so, i use every excuse to push him away..but, he aint going nowhere so thats why i call it a battle! lol, plus he's a cancer/leo and i am a cancer so...we WAR!!! lol
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lol,yea, that i am! I have a good man, who loves the hell out of me and my kids, but he wants to get married and have a baby. Im not having any more kids so, i feel like its unfair to him and he will either leave me or regret being with me in the end...so, i use every excuse to push him away..but, he aint going nowhere so thats why i call it a battle! lol, plus he's a cancer/leo and i am a cancer so...we WAR!!! lol
lol..I feel ya....I am a cancer as well....and my ex was a cancer and guuuurrrll we was so much alike...and that is probably why we bumped heads all the time...I tell ya we were a reflection of each other 4 real.
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Re: If love is a Crime I plead Guilty

I hear ya there. My best guy friend is a Leo, and Im a Leo.
We tried a relationship once long ago, and thats all we did was WAR lmao.

Im liking the poem Abiyah.
Loving your style of writing!!
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Old 07-24-2009, 11:56 AM
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I hear ya there. My best guy friend is a Leo, and Im a Leo.
We tried a relationship once long ago, and thats all we did was WAR lmao.

Im liking the poem Abiyah.
Loving your style of writing!!
Good morning "Ray of sunshine" thank you so much...I did a lot of writing when I was with him cuz if not I would have kicked his...a** so I just channeled that energy in the area of writing..thing is I had never wrote any type of spoken word prior to this relationship....as the old adage goes..some people can bring the worst or the best out of you....Peace
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lmao ray of sunshine..:P
I write everyday!

but yes That is so true!
Some people do bring the best and worst in you.

I started writing because I was really hurt by this guy in gr.8. LOL.
Been writing everyday since!

It definatly has a real feel to the writing tho.
You can feel the energy and its strong.
I love it.
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I started writing when i was 17, when a friend died...I had no idea i could do it, i just wrote it and was like, "wow, thats pretty good, right?" And when everyone said how good it was, i was like, "dang, i can write poetry? True!"
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lol Go Writing!!!!!!
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Re: If love is a Crime I plead Guilty

This is absolutely great. I like the topic, it's like a quote. You keep on writing , honest luck.
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Old 08-26-2009, 10:18 AM
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This is absolutely great. I like the topic, it's like a quote. You keep on writing , honest luck.
Thank you very much.....and welcome to ETJ
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