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Old 06-23-2009, 12:10 PM
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SSiimmpplleebbuutt EElleeggaannt

Dainty in her style and fashion, she doesn’t follow others, she has her own passion
Intellectually capable of making her own decisions, she’s always moving upward in the right direction
Constantly calculating her next move, she tries to figure out which action she should add or remove
Kindhearted girl like her might be thought to be naïve, but she’s too much of a thinker to be easily deceived
Exceptionally unique when compared to the other girls, she’s worth more than the world’s most expensive pearls
Entertaining in her conversation, you’d spend hours on the phone with her without using any concentration
Sensual looks in her eyes at times will cause you to lose composure, longing for the intimate side of her to get exposure
Handwritten expressions cannot fully describe her, because even celestial qualities you would ascribe her
Adventurous by nature ever since she was born, she’ll always want to explore, you can’t say you weren’t warned
Romantically inclined is what you will find, if you want to show her love, she likes it refined
Brilliantly achieving her academic goals, she uses her knowledge and expertise to play important roles
Reverently giving praise to the one she ordains, as her heavenly father by whom her life is sustained
Obedient to those whom she really respects, her loyalty will remain with you if you are her heart’s affectionate object
Obtaining the things of which she is impresses, she deserves the cream of the crop and she’ll settle for nothing less
Miserable whenever she’s ready, but can be easily calmed and with the right company remain steady
Fearful of things which she thinks can hurt her, she approaches it slowly and if it’s harmless then it will convert her
Independent in her actions to certain extent, you’ll be proud to have her in your life for what she represents
Envisioning her future, there is no mistaking that she’s an outstanding, successful professional in the making
Luckier than her it will be hard to find, they say she was born with a golden spoon in her mouth, she’s one of a kind
Denying the fact that she would make a good mother and wife is like cursing yourself to a lonely and loveless life.

By Leighton Holness
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Old 06-23-2009, 12:34 PM
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Re: Simple, but Elegant

i like this...very nice!
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Old 06-23-2009, 12:36 PM
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Re: Simple, but Elegant

Thanks, does it apply to you lady rasta?
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Old 06-23-2009, 12:40 PM
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Re: Simple, but Elegant

almost in every way!

how about yourself?...(if you are a woman).


if not, what woman inspred this writing? care to share?
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Old 06-23-2009, 12:43 PM
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Re: Simple, but Elegant

No i'm a male, i was inspired by observation of a female i know.
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Old 06-23-2009, 12:47 PM
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Re: Simple, but Elegant

must be a very special lady

(hint)

Women and Ladies like to be refered to such!

we rarely like to be called "famale"

u muss be very young (under 25)
anyway, i like your piece. Its very nice!
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Old 06-23-2009, 02:09 PM
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I understand what you are saying but i said female because to me Lady kind of sounds old(no offense) and she's under 25 like me(not by much either).Glad you liked it though, thanks.
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Re: Simple, but Elegant

Feathera.... This is one of my favorites!

It reminds me of someone I know.
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