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Old 11-22-2004, 08:23 PM
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Do Not Give Up

Do Not Give Up

After being beaten down for years and years,
You get tired of the burning in your eyes from your tears.
Supressing hurt and pain way deep inside,
It eats away at your joy and eats away at your pride.
Looking for a chance to get out and to break free,
Yuh jus' want a likkle bly to escape all of the misery.
One day merges with the next, it's a dreary drudgery.
Yuh feel like yuh fi get vex and turn to curmudgeonry.

But do not give up,
Keep the faith
Do not give in.
It looks like you're gonna lose now
But if you hold on you will win.
The Almighty God He sees the pain that you are in.
Just call on Him and await His blessing.
Don't you dare give up,
Don't you dare give in.
Dem a try fi mek yuh lose,
But God will make you win.
Don't you listen to the words downpressors are saying.
Just call on God and await His blessing.

All over the world
People's lives are shifting.
They feel like they're being forced
To conform to a system
That does not reward them
But makes them a victim
Of promises and lies
But never the real thing.
They feel like their hope is evaporating,
What they see in the mirror is quite disconcerting.
They think their voices aren't heard,
It's like their words are drowning.
But God hears every word,
Joy comes in the morning.

Still, dont' give up.
You've got to keep on fighting.
It looks like you're gonna lose,
But keep fighting, and you'll win.
The Heavenly Father sees the trouble you're in.
Have faith in Him, and await His blessing.
No badda give up,
No badda give in.
Dem a gi yuh a fight,
But with God you will win.
Nuh pay dem nuh mind wid dem naysaying.
Fight the fight alongside God,
An' nuh worry 'bout anyting.

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Old 11-22-2004, 08:28 PM
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Old 11-23-2004, 09:21 AM
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Re: Do Not Give Up

aww Bounty this is nice. I have to remember this when my spirits are down.
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Old 02-27-2005, 11:15 AM
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i had to go back and read this today bountyx.(thanks again for these words)
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i had to go back and read this today bountyx.(thanks again for these words)
You're most welcome Toya.
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Bounty this was right on time.
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Bounty I like that one....reminds me of me sometimes. But times are changing.
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Bounty I like that one....reminds me of me sometimes. But times are changing.
We've all been there at some point JC. Just gotta hang on and keep the faith.
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Do Not Give Up

After being beaten down for years and years,
You get tired of the burning in your eyes from your tears.
Supressing hurt and pain way deep inside,
It eats away at your joy and eats away at your pride.
Looking for a chance to get out and to break free,
Yuh jus' want a likkle bly to escape all of the misery.
One day merges with the next, it's a dreary drudgery.
Yuh feel like yuh fi get vex and turn to curmudgeonry.

But do not give up,
Keep the faith
Do not give in.
It looks like you're gonna lose now
But if you hold on you will win.
The Almighty God He sees the pain that you are in.
Just call on Him and await His blessing.
Don't you dare give up,
Don't you dare give in.
Dem a try fi mek yuh lose,
But God will make you win.
Don't you listen to the words downpressors are saying.
Just call on God and await His blessing.

All over the world
People's lives are shifting.
They feel like they're being forced
To conform to a system
That does not reward them
But makes them a victim
Of promises and lies
But never the real thing.
They feel like their hope is evaporating,
What they see in the mirror is quite disconcerting.
They think their voices aren't heard,
It's like their words are drowning.
But God hears every word,
Joy comes in the morning.

Still, dont' give up.
You've got to keep on fighting.
It looks like you're gonna lose,
But keep fighting, and you'll win.
The Heavenly Father sees the trouble you're in.
Have faith in Him, and await His blessing.
No badda give up,
No badda give in.
Dem a gi yuh a fight,
But with God you will win.
Nuh pay dem nuh mind wid dem naysaying.
Fight the fight alongside God,
An' nuh worry 'bout anyting.

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that is nice piece bounty. it is realy true i've been there and i never give up and now i'm doing realy well now.when i feel down i will always remember this thanks bounty.
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Re: Do Not Give Up

Very inspirational, wise words to live by.....Respek.
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Re: Do Not Give Up

I cried while reading dis, I aint giving up!!!!!!!
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