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Old 11-09-2004, 02:07 PM
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A Child named, "Secret"!

Look at it, so presious,
When you are born thats how it
is and now was!

Not quite a boy, little less than a girl,
but the best of both worlds!
Identity is yours
without a choice!
Everyone has one in th family!
Everyone has been one of the
family!
The black sheep,
The slow one!
The ugly one,
The pretty one,
The smart ass
the dumb ass,
The one most likely to succeed,
the one that won't!

But SECRET is that one that sees and be's all the above.
He may start off as a she then she be back to he!
Grabbing attention in the street, maybe the one
with the street.
The victim and the suspect!
THe innocent and the guilty!
The hustler or the Junkie!
THe ni99er or the hunkie!
The one thats being hung or
the one doing the haning!

That one that grew up in a life of
abuse, molestation, sodomy,
incest, rape, beatings, tortures!

This might be you!

You might that father that hits mothers,
that father that sexes his sons and daughters!
That father that cheats on the family,
that father that lies to his family,
that father that hates himself,
and because the mother that allows this,
is that mother that pays the same dues!

Yo ma,
what happen to the child you were carrying?
Missed Carried?
Or is your SECRET lying somewhere in the trash can?
Hidden in smoldering sheets, under pile and piles of trash heaps!
Oh, my bad
yeah your boyfriend, father, brother or cousin, robber, rapiest
pastor, that bastard raped you.
Now you all about hate Boo?
So you take it out on her or him or you,
and toss life you gave to the life of dying slave!

SECRETS.........

Man, why you are you lying to these guys!
Faminine in looks, got breast ass, but the
D#$k is tucked between thighs!
Why you hooking like you have too,
saying you are woman but you still carry boy tools!
Sucking jewels, for collections to get your
future cookies and rid yourself of born with tools!
Getting your ass whipped,
for lying on your tricks,
them feeling good with mouth sips
until tricks find you hidden sticks.
Lye today for death tomorrow.

SECRETS.......

Dayum, you too look a bit high,
whats the drug of the day,
can you even tell me todays date?
Ain't the same clothes you two
wore the day before yetersday, today,
and tomorrow?
Didn't I see you crawling through Ms ?
Window!
Holding on to a TV, DVD, jewerly and Stereo?
Oh you heling he move?
SO why dem 5.0 dudes after you two!
Still ying to your peeps abou getting high?
Stilling from them and telling them lies,
watching your moms and pops cry,
late night on the corner gettind high!
Try to sell your own baby to get to the mega
of drug highs!
Jail record longer than school records,
school ain't seen in months,
P.O haven't seen you in weeks,
a bathtub just haven't seen your ass at all!
Today must have been that high,
try to stick up undercover with a lie,
he shot, you hot,
drug boys you owe ova a hit of pot,
Two more murdered at 2am, that two was you!
And no one can identifiy you two...

Secrets.........

all the life we live to be in one,
to live one,
to hide one,
to label one,
see son, you will be....
hear me ma, you could be....

That one to be identified as
"A child called SECRET"!!!!
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Old 11-09-2004, 02:23 PM
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Re: A Child named, "Secret"!

Dah poem yah STINK Tongs.
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Old 11-09-2004, 02:28 PM
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Re: A Child named, "Secret"!

You touch on so many different issues in the piece, Twist. What a terrific social commentary.
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Yow!!!

Life........!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is the best yet!
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Old 11-09-2004, 09:51 PM
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Re: A Child named, "Secret"!

Thank you all. Just taking away the tongue action and just giving you the action from real life happenings!

Love ya

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bravo!
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Old 11-10-2004, 02:03 AM
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Re: A Child named, "Secret"!

Twistaaaaa.....I am speechless. You did it again!!!Love to read you!
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