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Old 05-28-2008, 10:55 AM
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Death on the mind...

Death on the mind of murderers
Murdering with no meaning or reason
Innocent victims bleeding
children running and screaming
perpetrators hopping in getaway cars and fleeing-
one lay on ground not breathing-
I pinch myself...i'm not dreaming
moments later...a mother screaming-
its the sound of lost brought on by heathens-
"ooooohhh Lawd Steven
...My only son..." dead and gone,
but not the only one-
plenty of guns in the ghetto
not just only one
I've got to get away, I've already lost one brother to this ****
but I can't just leave only mom.
they're murdering men, women and children now
and when they kill, sometimes its only fun
no work, no food, but bullets plenty
they even boast about squeezing the clip is empty,
empty like their minds
death has been the only thing on the mind of murderers from the start of time.

TBC
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Old 05-28-2008, 11:04 AM
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Re: Death on the mind...

Wow Great, that was powerful. I'm afraid of the TBC part.
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Old 05-28-2008, 11:08 AM
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Thanks Jam, gonna post the TBC part later tonight
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Old 05-28-2008, 11:41 AM
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I'll look for it.
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