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Old 02-28-2008, 12:22 PM
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Leaving?...jahlove

touche Jahlove
And By The By...

Fronds Of Fragrant Flora
Fill The Cracks
Of The One Way Ticket
"no Destination Track"
And A Three Minute Love Song
Has Me Looking Back;
I May Lack
The Vision
To See The Subtlety
Of
Minutes Yawning Into The Palm Of
Two Years, Perchance Three
Or
Four
Now Opens The Door
Of Regret.
Never Set
In Stone
Cold Nights Welcome Me Home
Cant Remember
The Reason I Left.

A Thorn Quite Simply
Preserves The Delicacy
Of The Rose,
A Work In Prose
As Petals Of Frustration Fade
From 96 Degreed Shades
Of Lonely.

Que Sera I Was leaving
One Step Forward
Then Two Leading
Their Very Own Way Back To You
Can This Truly Be Through?

And As These Words
Make Their Lazy Way
Accross My Page
It Occurs That
Time And Space
Just May
Render Ancient Wounds
Blurred Like The Morning Mist
To Vanish In a Sunkist Haze.

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Old 02-28-2008, 12:50 PM
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Re: Leaving?...jahlove

Ahhhhh mi luv when 2 poets battle it out This is great!

My favorite part:
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In 96 Degreed Shade
Of Lonely.
You two have a fabulous way with words.
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Old 02-28-2008, 01:05 PM
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Re: Leaving?...jahlove

tank you tank you

hey i re-edited tired and posted another new thread ... 'fruit of the womb'

check it out
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Returning

Returning


Well B I am back
I didn’t even unpack
Ok, so I was wrong
But this is where I belong
Me leaving I do regret
B can’t you just forgive and forget
I have since been through too many hearts
All were on this me, me attack
Concerned more with shopping carts
That’s all I seem to attract
Now I see destiny’s track only leads to you
Without you my life was never complete
I had rejected a love that was so true
You see I had your sad song on repeat
Please, I hope it’s not too late
My returning must be our fate
Baby I truly am sorry
Find that love somewhere in your memory
And
Baby, Just one more thing
Du a beg yu tel mi, pan yu finga dats nat a engagement ring
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