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Old 08-02-2004, 09:30 AM
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In love with my words

How many times have you gazed into the ceiling, thinking
about words in my piece.
How it held you, insides will yell too, just imagine
that the words was me.
Do you close your eyes to the next line,
imagine hands upon your waist line.
Time after time, tongues is twist n ur mind.
I write to give those who can't physically,
I make love to those, who aren't love mentally,
in close I will win you entirely and emotionally.
it won't be hard to be one with me.
I violate you dreams with steaming images.
I'm private to your reactions wanting me to know
is my goal to privilages.
I ask you, what you want, how you want it, when can
you get it and can I be your need.
Let me make love to physical just from the words you read.
I will lay you down in my pronouns, show you love with my verbs
tongue speaks in adjectives, pronunciate is my objective.
I'm your teacher in Freakology,
studying your body like biology,
our love will be chemistry,
multiple orgasms in trigonometry.
when you wake up from this dream,
and your thongs are filled from your bodily cream.
I have seduce you once again I'm your
high, your herb.
Aniticipating my spoken word,
you are in love with my words!
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Old 08-02-2004, 09:47 AM
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Re: In love with my words

WOw...yet another good one. You know I love your poems. I believe you too for some strange reason. I also love thi part....
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I'm your teacher in Freakology,
studying your body like biology,
our love will be chemistry,
multiple orgasms in trigonometry.
Well said.
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Old 08-02-2004, 09:50 AM
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Re: In love with my words

I'm speechless....
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Old 08-02-2004, 10:16 AM
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Re: In love with my words

Thanks, I'm going to ask a fellow poet who is on town for her birthday if I can share a piece by her called freakology 101. This piece is crazy erotic. Thank you for the responds. I hope like the next piece. Speaking of Speechless, I have a piece called that if I haven't post it yet. I will put on here later on.

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Old 08-02-2004, 10:24 AM
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Re: In love with my words

Yeah you posted speechless already tongs and I especially liked a whole day of you.
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Old 08-02-2004, 10:27 AM
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Re: In love with my words

Thank GOD, mi don't waan to post twice, even deh second time around is usually good too!
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Re: In love with my words

I thought this was a good piece, so I brought it back to ya again. I hope you like it the second time around!
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Nice piece Twist
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