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Old 07-28-2004, 08:58 PM
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tonguetwistnu nah do too bad.
Life is.....fi deh oooman!

Life is all about loving you,
Yeah baby, your man said loving you,
You know, as in I'm in Love with you.
Nah Luv, I'm not sick, messing around
playing any tricks.
I found life is about loving you,
and I have this ring to prove it.
The stone represents my heart and
soul I put in it.
The ring indicates the circle that has
no begining, no ending and surrounds
us with love.
Plantinum is the color,
out shinning the heavens light.
The metal represents our strength,
blessed with GODS gifts.


Life is...

Saying your name over and over again,
not during our bondings,
somewhere during the touching, kissing, hugging,
and the fondlings
Repeatedly calling names with desires backed with fires
and protected flames,
though we compensate ourselves with our
pain.... relievers and deliveries of mass shiveries.
my life won't breath the air of life,
without you here beside me.

Life is....

Tolerance, our practices of ignoring the sarcasms, the
spoil ness, the pickiness, fake smiles covering the evilness,
lack of performance shed unhappiness,
quiet personalities, indicates onle less innocence,
arguments having you shelling one self,
profanities, harsh words to me,
for your defense,
Love holds little settlement with much
refusal,
to you go when we show signs of imaturity.

Life is.....

The joining of your family with my family,
your friends intergrating with my friends,
different enviroments and religions.
Differnet colors of skins, morals,
etiquettes and attitudes,
your world to my world.
Tonight is your night lady,
I'm asking you,
No,
I'm offering you the deal for life,
to be one and structually eternal,
see our fires flames has reached its infernal.
Will you?
Can I?
Do we?,
have you, have me,
for tomorrow, in the future ,
beyond eternity, will it promise WE.
Seeing everyday to be Valentines,
Every present exchange to be Christmas,
Every spark of love to be the FOURTH of JULY!

Life is..

Now prepare yourself?
Hold my hand,
look down to me,
while I'm on bended knee.
I ask you, can life be, you and me
to life of just WE?

That is...

WILL YOU MARRY ME?
and be sentence to be man and wife as
long as we both shall breath!

Thats life!
You're my life!

Ask me,

What life is?
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Old 07-28-2004, 11:45 PM
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Re: Life is.....fi deh oooman!

WOW.....that's a good tongs. A love dis de best.
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Old 07-29-2004, 12:48 AM
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Re: Life is.....fi deh oooman!

Nice poem tongue, i really enjoyed it
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Old 07-29-2004, 12:52 AM
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Re: Life is.....fi deh oooman!

Quote:
Originally Posted by tonguetwistnu
WILL YOU MARRY ME?
and be sentence to be man and wife as
long as we both shall breath!

Thats life!
You're my life!

Ask me,

What life is?
another grate one
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ME TOO RICH FE ARGUE WITH B$#^T
ME TOO NICE FE INNA CAT FIGHT
ME TOO HOT AND A DAT NUFF GAL NUH LIKE DEM A EVERYBODY SOMETHIN AND ME A WIFE
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