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Old 05-16-2007, 03:53 PM
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Me too!! a lovely piece JASpice
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Old 05-16-2007, 05:12 PM
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OMG Spice I HAD TO log on to tell you your poem is awesome!!! I have had similar experiences lately and LOVE this poem! Nice work girl......and HI
Wow...Jammie! It's been a while and nice to see you!!

Thank you very, very much.....
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Old 05-16-2007, 05:14 PM
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I just write when I have to...

sometimes the voice is quiet... sometimes it is roaring...

and any poet knows what I am talking about... well actually any writer knows what I am talking about.
Gosh....this must mean I am an official poet!
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Old 05-16-2007, 05:17 PM
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Nice one Spicey,

I like it alot and says the way I feel about my special someone.

Thanks.
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Me too!! a lovely piece JASpice
I really appreciate both of your kind words.... this poem is very, very special to me and it's nice to see that others either relate, understand, or enjoy it. Thank you
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Old 05-16-2007, 06:00 PM
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Gosh....this must mean I am an official poet!
you always have been
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Old 05-16-2007, 08:32 PM
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Thats what I have been telling her Windy.......


she sees it now...
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Old 05-17-2007, 11:01 AM
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Yes, it is very nice Spice
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Old 05-17-2007, 11:35 AM
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Yes, it is very nice Spice
Awwww ... thank u mi fren
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Old 05-17-2007, 03:32 PM
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very nice....REALLY
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Old 05-17-2007, 03:42 PM
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very nice....REALLY
Thank you BL.... I am seriously speechless with all of these great remarks... thank you very much.
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Re: That Special Friend

hmmm
just like a hug or a nice pair of fuzzy slippers
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A Strange Feeling

Have you ever had that strange feeling?
The kind that you can’t explain?

I’m not talking of a lustful feel
Nor an obsession for another

It’s not about wanting to have something
Nor expecting anything

Not the feeling of danger
Nor any sort of scare

Not the idea of deja vu
Nor the want to figure it out

This feeling is a spiritual one
It fills you with joy

Yes... it is about someone you truly trust
That someone who has a purpose

The purpose is only known by God
And another could only guess

The strangeness is that it’s simple
Yet rather friendly, caring & honest

It’s enjoying any conversation
Not worrying about the next

It’s a feeling of comfort
One that took some time
Time to question, grow, learn, & understand

The strangeness lie’s with no needs
Nor a plan, but just joy
Something not expected nor expecting

This heaven sent feeling sends you to bed
with a smile and an image in your head
A thanks to God each night for such a blessing
and a prayer that it will never end .

God Bless my friend..... for you are a part of me and always will be


by JASpice


Wow...I LOVE this Poem I wrote...and the most wonderful thing about it is that I still feel the same way for this fren.... and I truly believe I ALWAYS will.
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Re: That Special Friend

The prelude to.......

http://www.everytingjamaican.com/jam...tml#post565786


It sure is amazing wen you know God is speaking to you!

I sure am glad I was listening and continue to do so!!!
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Re: That Special Friend

Really moving words, even though you managed to describe the feeling in your words
it still remains like a indescribable feeling in a way. Real nice spice.
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Old 09-08-2009, 11:31 AM
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Really moving words, even though you managed to describe the feeling in your words
it still remains like a indescribable feeling in a way. Real nice spice.

Thank you very much

I still have to get back with you on your poem ... I just returned from a trip and will send a pm shortly.
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