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Old 06-23-2004, 06:25 PM
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CANDY LOVE (if you have a sweet tooth)

This piece won me a spot on the radio after performing it at the convention center in Washington DC's For Sisters only Conference. You can hear me every thursday night on 95.5 WPGC, Love Talk and Slow Jams from 10pm to midnight. There was 25 people that performed, 3 men, rest were woman. They picked 5 and I was the only male picked with the 5. I hope you enjoy. And please, don't leave us with your viewing, leave us a comment. ONE!!!




CANDY LOVE

Private invitations for relations in your candy store,
only dressed in chocolate covered layers with
delicious cream insides,
I approach your factory with caution.
pealing your wrapper, I was taking by the size of your Milk Duds
not to mention how delicious your Kit Kat looked.
By your eyes, I can see you were pleased with my
Whatchamacalit.
Dangling towards you, the leader of my Three Musketeers,
went from Vienna sausage to Ball Park Frank just
from the excitement of touching your Reeses Cup
Aligning are bodies in that face to waste line position.
my first taste after spreading apart your Twinkie, and seeking your cream filling,
Where's the cream fillings, now thats what I'm talking about!
my uncounted amount of licks to your Tootsie Pop,
cause a eruption of fruit flavors with every flicker to your clitter
I try not to watch your body arch where the very tips of your Mounds was giving me Al-Mond-joy
at the point of your releases, a splash of of essence taking my breath with your Aqua-fresh, you shaking and quivering into Reeses-Pieces, and back suctions with sounds like Pop-Rocks.
Eager to give me Payday, you Zero into my Butterfinger, with your tongue exploring my Cadbury eggs,
heavy suctions, couldn't hold on to future eruptions, I jumped up to release all my Zagnut upon her Milkyway,
We both laid there remembering places like the food store, bakery and farmers market but nothing like these sweet places,
Now that are sweet tooths are filled with fillings from Candy Love between you and I, the sweetness is reminders what we found inside..
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Old 06-01-2005, 10:44 PM
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Re: CANDY LOVE (if you have a sweet tooth)

well i'm of a dark chocolate flavour, which is full of mystery that once tasted she can never get the taste sensation out of her mouth,and just has good when unwrapped, but i'm afraid because since between other names i've been called sweet, tasty, and other names i cannot publish on this site. but that i must compliment u on this piece of clevercandyness, ttnu.
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Old 06-02-2005, 12:16 PM
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Re: CANDY LOVE (if you have a sweet tooth)

Its funny you brought this piece up just around the anniversary of me performing it will be this weekend and the same convention. I will be performing there as well. Thanks for checking this!

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Its funny you brought this piece up just around the anniversary of me performing it will be this weekend and the same convention. I will be performing there as well. Thanks for checking this!

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no problem TTNU respect 2 u.
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Old 06-02-2005, 09:22 PM
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ok give me a minute........................dat was nice i likey!
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Old 06-03-2005, 12:58 PM
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Re: CANDY LOVE (if you have a sweet tooth)

Mmmmmmmmm; damn twisty........ you got flava baby!!!!
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Old 06-06-2005, 11:12 AM
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Re: CANDY LOVE (if you have a sweet tooth)

Thanks so much all, until Dudley found this one, it got no play on here. It was a hit at that convention last year. I did a couple of pieces saturday at the same convention. Still twist-n the crowd. Thanks to you guys of course!
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mash it up again ttnu !!
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Re: CANDY LOVE (if you have a sweet tooth)

Hmmmm... i would never have the nerve to get up on stage and actually read my poetry..... Not really a lack of confidence but I would feel like I was giving too much of myself away. Here you just see my words; there you would feel all of the emotion in them as well. I don't know if I am ready to give that much of myself to a crowd of people. Do you know what I mean TTNU?
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Re: CANDY LOVE (if you have a sweet tooth)

Excellent.......Muy Bien!!!
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Re: CANDY LOVE (if you have a sweet tooth)

Thank you. I just seem to be poppin up like pop tarts! Thank you so much for reading!
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