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Old 02-22-2007, 03:38 PM
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Its scary to take the chance to trust someone or letting them in, the fear of being hurt or rejected. I am to precious and I have to choose carefully who gets this gift.....
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Old 02-22-2007, 03:41 PM
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My question too?

Okay class... something tells me Alex doesn't REALLY need this explanation...but whatever...

Its about desiring someone physically, literally wanting them "inside" you but struggling with how letting someone in "physically" means letting them in emotionally which is much more scary AND if done too soon, can end up being hurtful (the metaphorical "death")... and the question at the end begs... is it worth it to get involved or better to leave it alone?

Class over.

Oh, OK.

Forgive me, I am only man.

Would it be something like.."Lets continue to be friends rather than to be intimate and risk ruining our friendship"?
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Old 02-22-2007, 03:43 PM
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I admit I didn't get it at first....but now that you've explained it I wonder why I didn't get it! This explains everything....makes me angry.


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What? You saw what? I'm confused too? It's most definitely not about moving backwards...

You mean that I was not the only one who didnt get it, initially?
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Old 02-22-2007, 03:46 PM
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Snip Snip Snip....
Yeah, thats right.
Cut m elike a bad habit!
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Old 02-22-2007, 07:32 PM
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Oh, OK.

Forgive me, I am only man.

Would it be something like.."Lets continue to be friends rather than to be intimate and risk ruining our friendship"?
Not exactly... It could end up with that as a result... although I think its more of an internal struggle that many women go through at the point at which they decide to let down the wall and let someone in...sometimes it takes less than an instant...others spend longer...
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Old 02-22-2007, 07:33 PM
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You mean that I was not the only one who didnt get it, initially?
Well...Jam doesn't count because she can't read. LOL. If you re-read my post... you will see that I don't believe you didn't "get it"...
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Old 02-22-2007, 07:34 PM
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Yeah, thats right.
Cut m elike a bad habit!
Oh please... let's not even go there, Alex. It's hard to imagine how you get dressed in the morning with all that string you have to put in your pockets...
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Old 02-23-2007, 05:33 PM
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Wow I love this poem..Miss B.....the rest of the thread not so much...but the poem was deep.....loved it!
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Wow I love this poem..Miss B.....the rest of the thread not so much...but the poem was deep.....loved it!
Thanks Teach... I agree with you... the rest of it, especially now looking back... it just pointless.
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Hey, hey! My had points and polks, pinches and pain and more pointing!
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Hey, hey! My had points and polks, pinches and pain and more pointing!
Yeah... I know... yourself!
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Inside
Inside me
Inside me now

No
It will hurt
To let you in
Come close but not inside

Outside
Outside me
Outside me now

You open me
bud before bloom
withers and dies if picked too soon

are some things are better
left untouched?
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My question too?

Okay class... something tells me Alex doesn't REALLY need this explanation...but whatever...

Its about desiring someone physically, literally wanting them "inside" you but struggling with how letting someone in "physically" means letting them in emotionally which is much more scary AND if done too soon, can end up being hurtful (the metaphorical "death")... and the question at the end begs... is it worth it to get involved or better to leave it alone?

Class over.
WOW MissB!!!! I obviously posted in this thread but don't even remember reading that poem! Its wonderful!

I think the guests reading it do too!
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Thanks Jammie..... Long LONG time ago!!!!!!! But still something I struggle with!
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