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Old 02-16-2007, 12:16 PM
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When it taste this great

You know when you tasted good catty

cause the sweet musk stays on your face

when your upper lip curls and your tongue twirls

smelling your leftovers makes things rise below my waist

I still feel the warmth

dayum you taste great

and how clean and soft your areas was

made me eat you last after I prayed

I'll take you in any ways

I hate to split you in several ways

but this tongue will sip, when splitting clit

with ahhhss and moans is all I say

Give me just one taste

and let me apologize for the escaping juice I waste

but with all that I eat, trying to catch gushing secrete

I like how your volcanoes erupt for me today

Dayum I love the smell of it

I like how my tongue feels when you swell on it

and when my tongue ring hits your clyt ring

echoes in your insides when slurpin sounds sail in it

locking legs to hold me there

I look to your eyes that watching me down there

whisper to yourself, eat that, yes right there, oooh ****!

I can read lips,

and what these lips are saying will stay on my tongue tips

Lawd get it away from my face

im licking like starving child

I'll be eating this for many days

69, **** that, I got 108

ways to feel you, than fill you

make love that appeals to you

a entry that will thrill you

and a exit that will kill you.

ummmmm, you smell good on my

taste good on my

still resting on my

my, my

what I would do for a taste of wet kissing

while I'm twisting inside your labia

ballbearing

scraping roof top

you might turn to a squirta

right here on my lips

is your taste

do you want a taste

cause off my lips

you taste even great

Just taste!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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TTNU
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Old 02-16-2007, 12:27 PM
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Re: When it taste this great

OMG....... i need to get up and walk around after that one...... Its been way tooooo long...
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Old 02-16-2007, 12:33 PM
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Re: When it taste this great

lol... erotica in the poetry forum... I'd say TTNU is back!
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Old 02-16-2007, 12:41 PM
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Re: When it taste this great

Day--um... SHY... I need to get up and shake that one off too!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 02-16-2007, 01:42 PM
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Day--um... SHY... I need to get up and shake that one off too!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I feel ya girl.... that poem makes me realize what I am missing out on....
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Old 02-16-2007, 01:49 PM
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Re: When it taste this great

I couldn't even read it. The first 3 lines . . . and I knew better than to read it. I'd be SWIMMING in my chair.
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Old 02-16-2007, 01:52 PM
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I couldn't even read it. The first 3 lines . . . and I knew better than to read it. I'd be SWIMMING in my chair.
Yea better wait till your home.....
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Old 02-16-2007, 02:37 PM
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Omfgggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
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Old 02-17-2007, 11:10 PM
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I think I need to go say a few prayers now!!
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Old 02-19-2007, 10:55 AM
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Re: When it taste this great

hmmmm I got something sweet and juicy for you

cum and get it

don't you here that dinner bell ringing?
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Old 02-19-2007, 11:56 AM
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Re: When it taste this great

LOLOLOL TTNU got all the gyals in a tizzy again.....You mos definitely have a gift baby.....
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Old 02-19-2007, 10:47 PM
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Re: When it taste this great

I'm so glad I'm able to move you in your seats after all this time. Thank you for all the praises.
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Old 02-19-2007, 11:18 PM
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I'm still waiting for my response... *sighs*
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Well done T......
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Old 02-20-2007, 04:15 PM
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Re: When it taste this great

Only you Boo.......

and right round the corner fram me...LOL...
maybe i will tell yall bout it sometime..
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