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Old 06-11-2004, 01:29 AM
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Unhappy the cry from a man's soul and heart

Words don't come easy when it comes to you

You’re more precious than diamonds and jewels

I just wanted to be there for you now I have lost you

Living in a precious house built out of bamboo



Walking over white sandy beaches

Walking on the path of Jesus

I wish we met in high school

I would be the best football player just to impress you

Be the best student just to sit next to you

Walked you home carry your books



You stole my heart like a crook

I walked to rain glitters glaziers and snow

But I never felt this cold

I have got the feeling of pain down deep in my soul I can't let go



I used to stay up late thinking about feeding you ice cream with a spoon

You lying on my bed watching the stars and the moon

Listening our child kicking from your womb

I’m tripping cause love has gone to soon



I wanted you to be my sun I wanted to be your moon our child would be the flower that need both powers to bloom

I guess I need sometime alone

There is no on to hold

To walk home

Just the memories of us on the phone



I just wanted us to have a home

You’re a queen with a body so sexy

All the women admire you with jealousy and envy

We could have been family

I would give you my last name and all my fantasy



I didn't want to move on

Didn’t want to listen to sad songs

Didn’t want to feel so wrong

Wish my heart were the place you belong



Life is unfair

I’m just scared I guess

I want to be with God so I can leave this mess

I hope you will never share a part of my stress the pain I have in my chest

When I see your pictures how could my happiness turn into sadness?

I know one day you will regret what happened



*from the one love once shared*



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Old 06-11-2004, 02:38 PM
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Re: the cry from a man's soul and heart

DANG!!!!! That's all I gotta say!!!
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Re: the cry from a man's soul and heart

Lawks....DI pain is soo...mi not even know wah fi seh to dat one....
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Old 06-24-2004, 07:33 PM
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Re: the cry from a man's soul and heart

That's a nice poem, did you write it? It seems like your writnig from a man's point of view.
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Old 06-24-2004, 07:51 PM
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Re: the cry from a man's soul and heart

Well my ex-boyfriend wrote it for me. He's still my friend but he lives in the Netherlands now.
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Old 06-29-2004, 01:41 AM
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jus beautiful!!!!!!!!!!
the poem creates a wonderful image ina ones mind.
jus beautiful and deep
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Re: the cry from a man's soul and heart

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Well my ex-boyfriend wrote it for me. He's still my friend but he lives in the Netherlands now.
Seeeeeeeeeeeeeee JC

Nice Poem BTW PB
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Re: the cry from a man's soul and heart

LOLOL did you search Netherlands??

I like the Antilles part
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Well hey guess what, there are like one gazillion guys from Curacao in Holland and 50% is unemployed and gangsta so they got nuff time to do u know what
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DWRCL......oh guess its a good thing I don't have any league standards then.
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Re: the cry from a man's soul and heart

Lemme shut up, Qtip might see dis and get mad, I was being rude
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