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Old 02-09-2007, 04:17 PM
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Freedom of my mind
Trapped in the past and confused about the future.
My mind won’t let it go
Will I find peace and serenity before my borrowed body will be unable to display it?
My mind doesn't know…

Will I find somebody to share my deepest thoughts with?
My mind wonders constantly….
Why if I am surrounded by people do I still feel lonely?
My mind asks frequently…

My body is in one place, my mind at another,
My mind’s agony every day…
Will my mind ever gain true freedom?
Or will it forever stay this way?

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Re: Freedom of my mind
Girl Imma come rescue you.....forget all that other crap.
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Old 02-09-2007, 04:27 PM
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Girl Imma come rescue you.....forget all that other crap.
What are you talking about????? Tell me.. did you YOU evern have total freedom in of ur mind?
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Re: Freedom of my mind
GG, that was good... I yearn total freedom from anxiety....
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What are you talking about????? Tell me.. did you YOU evern have total freedom in of ur mind?
Nope. I don't even have it now, but I'm in the process of sweeping out all the crap from my head. You'll get to a point where you can detach yourself girl. Just sink your energy and thoughts into your new beginning. You're going back to Holland, going back to school, you have your precious likkle Stookie, etc.
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Re: Freedom of my mind
Don't forget the sex.. emphasize on the sex

This poem was actually for all of us, I think we all struggle with our minds at times
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Re: Freedom of my mind
Word... GG... struggle of the mind is like the tide...it ebbs, it flows... but its is ever present... unless you are chillin' on the beach in Jamaica with a rum punch!
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Hmm I live in Paradise and got 20 small bottles of rum at home... still can't find peace of the mind
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Hmm I live in Paradise and got 20 small bottles of rum at home... still can't find peace of the mind
Very interesting perspective! I guess the grass is always greener.
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Hmm I live in Paradise and got 20 small bottles of rum at home... still can't find peace of the mind
That's because you LIVE there... for me... it's the process of escaping to a place where i don't have to deal with the real world that helps put my mind at ease...

Have you ever been on a vacation? Some down time? Time to refocus and reenergize the spirit? It sounds like you are overdue, girl.
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I do believe I have not found inner peace because I have much to learn about you know who.. I believe that I will find my inner peace AND I believe I will get to share it with many others.
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You guys are killing me with the you know whos and the you know whats and the you know wheres!!!!!!
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Hmm I live in Paradise and got 20 small bottles of rum at home... still can't find peace of the mind
Its not about the external GG its about the internal. It's your spirit that is in unrest and that is a good thing when it forces you to take the mask off and look at the inner person, the true GG. The GG that only you and God Knows. Be still continue to seek with a open heart and you will find your answers....trust me, you will......when God wants us to move to another level he does two things, he directs us and waits for our response. If we are obedient we get to where we should be alot easier and quicker than if we are disobedient. If you are like me and somewhat stubborn or heard of hearing he will force you into a position where you have to listen. You are there now so listen....he will give you the anwers...then act on what he tells you to do.
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