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Old 01-27-2007, 07:53 PM
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In Your Presence.....
In Your Presence:

I would feel like a lady
I would walk tall and represent you
I would smile for everyone to see
I would know how lucky I am
I would be honored


In Your Arms:

I would feel safe and secure
I would feel cared for and loved
I would comfort you when you need
I would expect you to TRUST me to do that
I would soak up the feeling of you


In Your Bed:

I would be beside you
I would pray with you before drifting off
I would sleep long and quietly
I would always find you in the night
I would wake up to you.
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Old 01-27-2007, 07:56 PM
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Very nice Jam.......like it!
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Awww thanks. I kinda like it too. I'll dedicate it to some man I might have down the road.
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LOLOLOL thats a good Idea.....or you could get a new Golden Retriever and dedicate to him....lololol
Prolly better off that way
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Well I already have the dog.....the house (as of today)....the kid.
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So why you wanna screw it all up with a man....they nothin but trouble
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You're probably right. But can't you just let me have some stupid fantasy?? LMAO!
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Oh my bad sorry its a nice poem........did I mention that i liked it?
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LOL you're a real mood killer.
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Well have you seen my poetry lately...no wonder
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Yah I totally understand too. I have faith that you will pick up soon....
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Ya... I'm not sure you two should be consoling one another right now... your poems are making me want to slit my wrists.
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JC,
I AM VERY Impressed.
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Old 01-28-2007, 06:22 PM
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ALEX!!!!!!!! Is there any chance you have become more than ONEman... with all these women groupies it's more than ONE MAN can handle???
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Thanks Alex.

Nice one MissB. I was thinking the same thing.
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