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Old 11-16-2006, 12:31 AM
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If I could………

I would wake with the morning sun upon my face
Safely wrapped in the arms of my King
My heart beating inside of his chest
His breath softly whispering across my neck
Legs intertwined like vines that have grown together always
Held in the warmth, from the closeness of our bodies
Enveloped in the peace that he brings to my life.

If I could………

I would drift in the deep blue sea
Knowing that my anchor was strong and silent
The rhythm of the water, us, pulsating through me
Our two spirits becoming one
Floating on the ecstasy that he brings to my life

If I could………

I would recline on the roof gazing at the stars
Our hands woven together, the fabric of love
My head on his sculptured chest, listening to the
Steady strong beat of his love for me.
Dreaming in the serenity that he brings to my life.
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Re: If I could.........
Beautiful teach.

I used to feel that way too. Now, I don't have to dream about it anymore. Nice feeling.
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Old 11-16-2006, 12:21 PM
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Nice to be in love.....
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Nice poem. Did you write it?
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Old 11-16-2006, 05:34 PM
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Nice poem. Did you write it?

Yes mam..I wrote it last night...I was inspired to write it on my trip and had to wait till I got home to do it.....but when you wake up in the morning a D's house the sun shines in the window right on your face.....when I woke up I thought..I need to write about this....
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Awww how sweet. Imma write a poem when I wake up hung over on the beach somewhere.
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Old 11-16-2006, 05:45 PM
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Awww how sweet. Imma write a poem when I wake up hung over on the beach somewhere.
Great...you can post it in the Jamaican Limerick thread......
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Thanks GG.......
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Old 11-16-2006, 09:54 PM
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I keep reading it over and over again, I am truly impressed
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WOW!! I love it teach...feels so real and puts mi in a daze!
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Old 11-17-2006, 11:13 PM
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*sigh*.........post JA Depression.....
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If I could

I would leave the last kiss
upon my lips forever
until again I can feel his rough hands
softly caressing my cheek
his spirit, connecting with mine
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Old 12-16-2006, 12:23 AM
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If i could..........

I would sit with his head laying across my lap
softly caressing his face
feeling the manliness of a slightly unshaven chin
as I dream comfort that he brings to my life
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Old 12-16-2006, 12:25 AM
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wow.... TEACH IS ON FIYAH
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