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Old 08-10-2006, 02:17 PM
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What would you do if you knew that I loved you.
What would you do if every morning you opened your eyes,
I was standing with your breakfast next to you.
What would you do if all you had to do was take a shower and get dressed
because I've already done di ironing and cleaning for you.
What would you you came home dinner is prepared and still warm
because I've pin pointed your exact time of arrival while making spaghetti.
What would you do if every night you came home
your robe was laid out and I had your bath water ready.....
What would if you knew that I loved you,
everything I had was yours, my life revolved around you.
What would you do if you never had to worry about sleeping with stress,
relieved by a daily massage, and good sex should take care of the rest.
What would you do if you knew that I loved you....
But I've never said the words to you........
Would you question if my love was true?
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Old 08-10-2006, 02:20 PM
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Re: Actions Versus Words

Well Honestly...me.....i would prolly cheat on you and **** everyting up like I always do when I have a nice guy!!!!! Was gonna write..lol but Its just not even funny.....

BTW nice poem!
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Old 08-10-2006, 02:25 PM
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Well Honestly...me.....i would prolly cheat on you and **** everyting up like I always do when I have a nice guy!!!!! Was gonna write..lol but Its just not even funny.....

BTW nice poem!

Uhhhh... okay........
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Old 08-10-2006, 02:41 PM
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Yeh i know I need counseling....what ever.....lololol
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Old 08-10-2006, 05:49 PM
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well...i point for the men!
(if that was true, is it true?)
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I don't like spaghetti.
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Old 08-21-2006, 12:34 PM
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Re: Actions Versus Words

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What would you do if you knew that I loved you.
What would you do if every morning you opened your eyes,
I was standing with your breakfast next to you.
What would you do if all you had to do was take a shower and get dressed
because I've already done di ironing and cleaning for you.
What would you you came home dinner is prepared and still warm
because I've pin pointed your exact time of arrival while making spaghetti.
What would you do if every night you came home
your robe was laid out and I had your bath water ready.....
What would if you knew that I loved you,
everything I had was yours, my life revolved around you.
What would you do if you never had to worry about sleeping with stress,
relieved by a daily massage, and good sex should take care of the rest.
What would you do if you knew that I loved you....
But I've never said the words to you........
Would you question if my love was true?
No I would not ask you!!!!

I would wonder if ur too good to be truth or....

I would think you were Gay Gay!!!
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Re: Actions Versus Words

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What would you do if you knew that I loved you.
What would you do if every morning you opened your eyes,
I was standing with your breakfast next to you.
What would you do if all you had to do was take a shower and get dressed
because I've already done di ironing and cleaning for you.
What would you you came home dinner is prepared and still warm
because I've pin pointed your exact time of arrival while making spaghetti.
What would you do if every night you came home
your robe was laid out and I had your bath water ready.....
What would if you knew that I loved you,
everything I had was yours, my life revolved around you.
What would you do if you never had to worry about sleeping with stress,
relieved by a daily massage, and good sex should take care of the rest.
What would you do if you knew that I loved you....
But I've never said the words to you........
Would you question if my love was true?

Nice poem D...and yes I would, its easier to believe the bad stuff.
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So no one prefers di actions over di actual words?
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So no one prefers di actions over di actual words?
The actions are always special and nessesary....But it is also necessary to say the words. Cuz if you truly loved me (like your actions suggest) nothing could keep it from your lips....So yes, I would question it

but nice
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Old 08-25-2006, 05:04 PM
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The actions are always special and nessesary....But it is also necessary to say the words. Cuz if you truly loved me (like your actions suggest) nothing could keep it from your lips....So yes, I would question it

but nice
well put.....

so di actions and words share di same importance in completely proving ones love....
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so di actions and words share di same importance in completely proving ones love....
di words dem mostly crap thats why wi ooman nah really care bout dem! Di actions?... hmm thru bad experiences man a done give us already.. we assume it av sumthin' behind a it! .......... ohhhh I sound like a man hater!!! hahaha I love men for tryin' tricks on us!!!
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So no one prefers di actions over di actual words?

I want both.... show me how you feel, then tell me.....
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di words dem mostly crap thats why wi ooman nah really care bout dem! Di actions?... hmm thru bad experiences man a done give us already.. we assume it av sumthin' behind a it! .......... ohhhh I sound like a man hater!!! hahaha I love men for tryin' tricks on us!!!
What's up wid all di male bashing today?!!!
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