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Old 07-04-2006, 11:57 PM
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The New Dawn

(My first post - one of my favorites)


Wrapped in a tight, yet soft holding
there formed grace and truth & glory
time to patience in an ever changing world

A growth of self increased
allowing those looking on
to whisper to themselves
the amazing development

then that day came when
destiny fulfilled itself, when
the fine specimen of nature
entered the door

gazing on the ripples in
the pond below, reflecting
the soft place of meditaion
now exited, into a bright
exhilarating future of peace

Time to make a contribution
Time to make the world more colorful
Time to make others smile, naturally

The new dawn, a new birth....a new year

by luckyd
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Old 07-05-2006, 12:10 AM
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Re: The New Dawn

nyce, nyce lucky. yeah we need sum of that here, give thankz for that.
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Old 07-05-2006, 01:18 AM
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Re: The New Dawn

I need to get a new dawn. Thanks Lucky!
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Old 07-05-2006, 01:41 AM
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Re: The New Dawn

Luckyd...very nice one! I really love to read your poems and look forward to seeing more of them over here!
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Old 07-06-2006, 01:49 AM
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Re: The New Dawn

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Luckyd...very nice one! I really love to read your poems and look forward to seeing more of them over here!

lots more to come...
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What a pretty picture that paints!
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