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Old 06-01-2006, 12:05 AM
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Waiting

Months, we played this game,
in my dreams, I hear you calling my
name.
When will you request for me
When will I fulfill this temptation
Longing for our entities to be one
Lets cut this distance short
and unite after breaking openings
Your voice sings me alseep
and keeps my guard alerted
I want to wake up to cold hands
and be warmed by lips embraced
tickled by umms and ummms
confronted with a smile sideways
for my exposure to come to closure
I flip through emailed pics of of your
best side, from all four sides.
A smile awaiting your presence
dryness yearning for that essence.
We talk too much
but now my actions want to be uncut
meet me half way
just name the day

I'll be............waiting
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Old 06-01-2006, 12:20 AM
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Re: Waiting

I agree with this one 100% TTNU! Actions speak louder than words!!! "The moment" Sounds like it could be at hand!
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interesting.... id much rather the real thing
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Old 06-02-2006, 06:59 PM
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Hmmmmmmm...had to come back and read this one again!!!! I can feel the building desire in it!
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Old 06-02-2006, 07:57 PM
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excellent TTNU, wordz have me thinking now on that.
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Hmmmmmmm...had to come back and read this one again!!!! I can feel the building desire in it!
Fi Real! Love this one!
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... part 6969
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its always good to see a writers work revived. Thank you ladies
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