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Old 03-29-2006, 10:31 PM
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Just let me in

Just let me in

Can we skip the get to know
you's
Who you be
Who I be
Can we, I mean
Can you just open your mouth to mine,
open your legs and let me inside.
And we can make this our way of saying Hi
Can we exchange taste,
my face to your waist,
your face to my waist.
To introduce our names
What’s to really know about me?
I'm your height, your perfect size,
And when we are align with me inside
We fit so beautifully
all I need is your consent.
A bit a long kissing, touching
caressing, deep but slow type thrust to full entries
with your legs high at 11:59, feet to my face and knees bent.
In just one connection,
you will know my name,
have understanding about me through bonding frame.
Each thrust will tell you my back ground,
with the ladies and how I act now
when I don't back down.
Bring back your smile
You’ll know me like you knew me
And you know its about to go down
When I go down, you can
feel me inscribing my life,
my date of birth and full
name in cursive circulars.
Nothing particular,
just skip the get to know you,
and let me in.
Cause with all the conversations
our curiosities of unifying and bonding these sexual entities.
Brings our body language beyond natural highs.
When I'm standing with you,
Hold all talks until I’m standing in you
I know I’m taller than you
so will you simply adjust yourself
and let me inside
So we can be a shadow figure of one not two
Shhhhhh, no talking.
Save that for later.
Show me your best side
when doors open wide
Smiles on high with crying eyes
and you wanting me to come inside.
Just look at me,
lean head back and say take me.
I want to learn your inner most.
I want to be the talk from your
lips as your inner host.
So when I say I'm coming over
can you just be ready,
to let me through apartment doors, spreading your meaty
gates like come get me to open corridors.
Can you not say hi,
just take me,
insert me inside,
and sigh with ahhhs and thank you's.
Will you let me in
with no questions,
barely clothed,
turning our desires on fire like freaks and hoes
coming out the closet sexing til
our wetness gets to dryness fo sho
can I get this win

so let me get to the part I penetrate
girl I can stand here doing the pee pee dance
no longer can I wait
my waist is already at a mode of gyrate
I am up to the highest strain
So girl
just let me in
just let me in

Just let me in
your Mutha ****a, dayumm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just let me in.
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Old 03-29-2006, 11:11 PM
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mmmmm OK !!
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Old 03-29-2006, 11:42 PM
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kool Kut Piece Ttnu.
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Old 03-30-2006, 01:04 AM
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Sexy........nice!
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Old 12-06-2006, 07:49 PM
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Omg....................
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Old 12-08-2006, 10:18 PM
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I'm going for cold shower
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Old 03-15-2008, 09:48 AM
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Re: Just let me in

Modified this piece for a voice recording I'm doing tonight. Miss ya! Holla at your boy email, myspace, hi5, facebook or something. I go by twistnwords now but I will always be TTNU to you guys!
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Old 03-15-2008, 12:06 PM
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OOOOOOOOOOH TT thanks for bumping this! Its amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 03-15-2008, 12:18 PM
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yah... great piece!!!
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Old 03-16-2008, 03:06 AM
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as always....

this man is amazing with words...
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Old 03-18-2008, 07:20 PM
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you got mad skillz capt.
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Old 03-18-2008, 07:32 PM
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I'm glad there are some poetry bumpers lately. They seem to find the ones I never saw.

Love this one.
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Old 03-24-2008, 12:15 AM
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D@mn, D@mn, D@mn
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Love it!!!
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