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Old 01-16-2006, 09:52 PM
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Mind, Heart, and body

Your mentality was my target.
I spoke of having my way with you
through words.
I made love with visions that
were painted.
You already had me in your bed,
and in your wettest dreams..
You reach for me, eyes wide,
to every beat from the screen.
Your mind was first......


Blood is rushing, nerves are
out of line,
communications of mix
feelings, from heart to
mind.
You feel for me, while you feel
me.
Your mind comteplates phyiscals
greetings,
your heart invites with love in
future meetings.
When I finally kiss you in
deep sleeps,
you wake up in my arms,
in my arms you will be.
The heart aches.....


Body refuses to hold back your surpression,
tension builds with leaky disbursments.
You can't stop touching with soft hands,
holding privates with aggressive grips.
Your hands are my hands,
my hands in invisible form,
is doing all of this?
You lose sleep to fall asleep fast
for a dream again,
to tremble in the puddles you created,
waiting for my force to be within.
You consult Mind which already decided
that Heart allow to feel this,
body is open wide, ending results is
Acceptance!

Waiting is over!
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Old 01-16-2006, 10:15 PM
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Re: Mind, Heart, and body

Sounds like this is "my" New Years resolution for 06 ! To make that come true.
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Old 01-17-2006, 07:17 AM
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Re: Mind, Heart, and body

isnt it great how u dont have to be with someone to feel them!?...

you are so good at putting thoughts into the right words ttnu!...
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Old 01-17-2006, 11:29 PM
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Re: Mind, Heart, and body

That's a hot poem tonguetwistnu.
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