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01-08-2006, 04:00 AM
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How did you get in here?
How did you get in here?
I am sorry sir but this place is closed This place I call my heart. The door is shut, the blinds are drawn, This is the private part We’ve been shut down for many years Because its out of business The lights are out, the floor is swept, You really must forgive us. You found a door? You had a key? You climbed in through the window? I surely didn’t open it I might just let you in though I haven’t let a person in for an eternity I put the closed sign on the door I tuned them all away Suddenly I seem to find I want you here with me I guess I’ll let you stay a while As long as you are tender And if you stay here long enough The keys I might surrender.    
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01-08-2006, 04:43 AM
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Re: How did you get in here?
Very nice...open up don't let him pay for another's past mistakes
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01-08-2006, 05:34 AM
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Re: How did you get in here?
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01-08-2006, 06:06 PM
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Re: How did you get in here?
This pretty dayum deep. I like this. I hope everyone else enjoys.
Magnificant work!
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 My doors are open, all you have to do is walk through them! Let us never negotiate out of fear. But let us never fear to negotiate. John F Kennedy
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01-09-2006, 08:02 AM
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Re: How did you get in here?
this is outstanding. I really liked it. Makes u wonder or it makes me wonder how the hell some get where they dont belong and y I allow them to linger and linger and never leave.
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01-09-2006, 08:37 AM
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Re: How did you get in here?
the lights never go out for some.....
for others it never turns on..... Before you know it the one you should be with Has found someone else and gone....
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"Who can find a virtuous wife? For her worth is far above rubies" Proverbs 31; 10
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03-13-2008, 04:24 PM
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Re: How did you get in here?
What a fabulous poem Teach! How did I miss this? I love it!
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 Nobody can go back and start a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending. 
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03-13-2008, 04:57 PM
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Re: How did you get in here?
Jah........its always nice to see you.
Yes there are lots of great poems in here, thanks to our guest who usually bring them up.
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Nobody can go back and start a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending.
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