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Old 12-22-2005, 06:50 PM
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Thoughts of You

Thoughts of you

When he smiles at me……
Its you I see

When he pulls me close to him…..
Thoughts of you are creeping in

I fight to stay present and be with him
Thoughts of you are creeping in

His touch is your touch….
His mouth is your mouth
His arms are your arms
His lust is your lust

We talk and we laugh but when the moment is silent
Thoughts of you are creeping in

He is pleased with the new found passion we share
Thoughts of you are creeping in

My want for him is my want for you
My kiss for him is my kiss for you
My touch on him is my touch on you
My desire for him is my desire for you

I push the thoughts out cause I know they are wrong
The thoughts they just keep creeping in
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Old 12-22-2005, 10:08 PM
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Re: Thoughts of You

Well you need to cut someone back. You can't have two.
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I don't want two, just one........."The one"........he might be closer than I think......just on the horizon.
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Re: Thoughts of You

This poem is sooo real...a love that was once so great can captivate your heart so much that it trickles into future relationships. Awesome poem.
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Old 01-08-2006, 02:21 AM
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This poem is sooo real...a love that was once so great can captivate your heart so much that it trickles into future relationships. Awesome poem.
Thanks....I am glad it moved you.
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Bump...saw a guest lookin at this....I love this one!
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