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Old 12-14-2005, 11:01 PM
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Restricted Space....

They don't understand you,
they turn there back and say
they don't believe you.
Saying you are too grown.
You make your selfish decisions.
Walking around like you are all
that, secretly on a mission.

But they don't know you!

You are constantly under different pressure,
at a young age you were forced to give up your
treasure.....by a family member.
Now you are out there, over there,
with this Man old enough to be a your father,
but why even bother.
You get what you want,
they get what they want.
And in your own way, they treat
you better than your father and mother.


But they just don't know you.


Lifes challenges in and out your houses,
schools can barely teach you,
parents can hardly reach you.
Now you are dependent on
sex, drugs and grown folk thangs.
You worry more about your
hair and nails, than you worry
about passing the grade,
and walking across that stage.
On graduation day


But they still don't know you.

You're on the verg of self destruction,
getting drunk to forget,
always high like its nothing.
Sexing older guys to relieve you of
young somethings.
How degrating,
your life is in shambles,
and you living low ratings,
you get treated to happy meals,
for rewards of your secrets get taking,
and theres no mistaking, misconceptions,
and falsely painted murals, that she
is no good and she is all hood,
that she is grown gyal, with
young gyal intentions,
see she knows well, and
in her heart she tells GOD she failed,
already excepting a life term with hell,
things were taking from her, but she won't tell,
consequences, not worth living in,
she gave up,
then later came death,
with little hope of her ship setting sail.
You act like you walk in her shoes,
or been what she been through,
But you can never be her,,

cause you don't know her....
but she knows you!

the wondering body without a soul,
expressions without a face..
my understanding, your judgement,

Her Restricted space.

By LeRoy Goetzendanner
aka
TTNU
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Old 12-15-2005, 06:26 AM
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Re: Restricted Space....

poem.... brilliant... i dont know how u got into a young girls mind.. i do know however u could easily get into a young girls pants!!!! lol that pic is creeping me out!!!
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Old 12-15-2005, 12:50 PM
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Re: Restricted Space....

WOW... you have great talent my youth... keep it up.

The read was enjoyable.. I had to put my client on hold to finish reading your peice..
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Old 12-15-2005, 01:11 PM
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Re: Restricted Space....

Yo the poem shot my lawd mi nah lie but the tongue a di end scary!
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Old 12-15-2005, 03:09 PM
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Re: Restricted Space....

Nice poem Tungs.....another one for the books
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