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Old 12-07-2005, 11:39 PM
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Wanna Fall

I wanna fall
but cant seem to let go
all these years ive been praying
for the sumbody that u are

givin u the most of me
daily u got the best of me
but the past it has stricken me
learning to trust again
you assure me that youre true
then y dont u give me
the one thing i ask of you.....

my mind asks
my heart wont tell
im yours for the taking
let the lord do our making

I wanna fall

fears are clutching me
holding my legs
holding my my shoulders
pushing my head toward the ground
but i hear you....

i feel your presence
you believe in me
you are faithful to me
your laughter captures me
enraptures me

with such force u r so gentle

I wanna fall
shake off insecurities
shake off the pain
which caused impurities
in the love...left in me...

with your arms around me
lets fall....
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Old 12-08-2005, 12:45 AM
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Re: Wanna Fall

watch where you fall, good ONE just.
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Old 12-08-2005, 12:47 AM
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Did U Write This? It's Good!!
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Old 12-08-2005, 06:14 AM
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Re: Wanna Fall

thanku this has been at the back of my diary for awhile now.....yes sexy i write lol sumtimes rubbish sumtimes sumthin ok....
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Old 12-10-2005, 08:23 PM
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Re: Wanna Fall

I pray to the heavens with open arms,
do you really want to be caught,
do you have the heart to fall.
Can you handle a man falling with you,
a man that is falling for you,
a man that falling many times
knowing that you were here all
along.

I dare not turn away the opportunity
to clear the ways of gray skies,
to produce rainbows for slides
and bright sunshine for your guide.
Love, no longer do you need to hide.

Just let go of yourself,
release your unchained heart,
you wanted to fall without fear,
but I beat you to the start.
Love is more than words comprised
to a art form of higher connections
with arrangements for lifetime
committments and procreation in mind.

Love is you and I,
that day we lean back and fall,
and fall, and fall, and continue to
fall down a endless place,
like our love.... endless!

So fall........
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Old 12-29-2005, 11:33 AM
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Re: Wanna Fall

Justsimplifyit, the poem is wonderful! You should really publish this one somewhere for others to read! And if you have other poems as well - you can make an online poetry-site somewhere! You'll have all your poems at one place, there's no risk to lose them, and people may easily go back to them and re-read them..

I myself am an amateur painter and did the same with my first paintings. The photos of my paintings are placed in a site (I understand nothing of website building but I used sitekreator.com, it's free for small accounts), and since some of the paintings are a bit personal I locked them with a password. So some of my paintings are publicly available, others may be seen just by people whom I give the password..But definitely putting your poetry online will let lots of people read the nice poems you write!
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Old 12-31-2005, 02:47 AM
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why thankyou jamspoon .... its a secret but im writing a book at the moment... ive kept journal for 15 years now and i definately want my poems kept safe somewhere...even the ones i wrote as a ten year old are so special to me, and so very sad as they helped me get through the tough times...
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justsimplifyit, if you have started making your website pls show us what you have done so far! We are curious to see! And wish you luck with the book!
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