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Wanna Fall
I wanna fall
but cant seem to let go all these years ive been praying for the sumbody that u are givin u the most of me daily u got the best of me but the past it has stricken me learning to trust again you assure me that youre true then y dont u give me the one thing i ask of you..... my mind asks my heart wont tell im yours for the taking let the lord do our making I wanna fall fears are clutching me holding my legs holding my my shoulders pushing my head toward the ground but i hear you.... i feel your presence you believe in me you are faithful to me your laughter captures me enraptures me with such force u r so gentle I wanna fall shake off insecurities shake off the pain which caused impurities in the love...left in me... with your arms around me lets fall.... ![]()
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Re: Wanna Fall
Justsimplifyit, the poem is wonderful! You should really publish this one somewhere for others to read! And if you have other poems as well - you can make an online poetry-site somewhere! You'll have all your poems at one place, there's no risk to lose them, and people may easily go back to them and re-read them..
I myself am an amateur painter and did the same with my first paintings. The photos of my paintings are placed in a site (I understand nothing of website building but I used sitekreator.com, it's free for small accounts), and since some of the paintings are a bit personal I locked them with a password. So some of my paintings are publicly available, others may be seen just by people whom I give the password..But definitely putting your poetry online will let lots of people read the nice poems you write! |
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Re: Wanna Fall
why thankyou jamspoon .... its a secret but im writing a book at the moment... ive kept journal for 15 years now and i definately want my poems kept safe somewhere...even the ones i wrote as a ten year old are so special to me, and so very sad as they helped me get through the tough times...
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