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Old 12-01-2005, 11:21 AM
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My soulmate HiVee

I met her during a unprotect enviroment,
the party was live.
I was drinking and doing drugs,
using needles with leftover blood,
going inside, with no rubber glove,
all naked in a stranger making love.
Sexing with this girl then switching up.
This doctor friend told me
about a girl named Hivee.
I didn't step to her, she more like came on to me.
It took awhile for us to connect,
but bonded so well after having the rawest
of many sex.
We found ourselves inseparable.
And though we were not compatible.
things has been just us since we met.
Months has past,
she is still with me,
I think our commitment will last.
Even people around me notice
changes in me...since I met her.
I don't do alot, don't look the same,
uncontrolable diets have loosing weight.
Not too many of my people want
to be around me because of her.
I think they just don't understand her.
I try to be real with myself, that maybe
she might not be good for my health.

But Hey,
Thats life! It can't be any better,
but I see days of the worst around
the corner.
My friends try to warn me.
Said her type is known to be
deadly.
But I knew people who delt with
her type.
They seem to be happy with life,
well, sort of living right.
I guess!

But then again, I don't see them
much more.
I heard one got sick from loving her,
and he is now no more.

Funny thing is,
this girl will out live you
because my girl,
my soulmate, Hivee
It was told to me, that she is
HIV, her pronounced HIV, not Hivee!

She is Aids, infecting is her game
and now that she has me
in her life.
I will look at living in a different way.

So you have a choice,
to be protected,
oral is still sex and yes
from doing that you can get it!
avoid that also good unprotect feeling.
that sharing unprotected dealing,
Cause she has a suprise type of feeling,
followed by your life she is stealing.
She's a lifetime commitment,
in your life a permanent resident.
She will feel so good to you,
it will hurt you later and bring
ill to you,
lose all the looks, strength and
will in you....
My girl Hivee, has plans,
to make you hers and hold you,
til she fills you and then kills you....

A story about my too lates,
no turning back the time
to those first dates...She's
My soulmate and maybe yours

My girl pronounced H I V
last name NO CURES!

Be aware, today is Aids awareness day! Know the facts.

By LeRoy Goetzendanner
aka
TTNU
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Old 12-01-2005, 11:45 AM
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Re: My soulmate HiVee

wow.............
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Old 12-01-2005, 11:50 AM
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Re: My soulmate HiVee

Thanks so much for adding a twist to your signature!


Quote:
Originally Posted by windypace
wow.............
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Re: My soulmate HiVee

Quote:
Originally Posted by tonguetwistnu
I met her during a unprotect enviroment,
the party was live.
I was drinking and doing drugs,
Sexing with this girl then switching up.
This doctor told me her name is Hivee.
It took awhile for us to connect,
but bonded so well after having the rawest sex.
We found ourselves inseparable.
And though we were not compatible.
things has been us since we met.
Months has past,
she is still with me,
I think our commitment will last.
Even people around me notice
changes in me...since I met her.
I don't do alot,
not too many of people want
to be around me cause of her.
I think they just don't understand her.
I try to be real with myself, that maybe
she might not be good for my health.

Hey life can't be any better,
but I see days of the worst around
the corner.
My friends try to warn me.
Said her type is known to be
deadly.
But I knew people who delt with
her type.
They seem to be happy with life,
sort of living right.
I guess!

But then again, I don't see them
much more.
I heard one got sick from loving her,
and he is now no more.

Funny thing is,
this girl will out live you
because my girl,
my soulmate, Hivee
It was told to me, that she is
HIV, not Hivee!

She is Aids,
and now that she has me
in her life.
Life will never be the same.

You have a choice,
to be protected and
avoid that also good feeling.
Cause she has a suprise feeling
a lifetime commitment, in your life a entitlement,
that will feel so good, that
it will hurt you later and bring
ill to you,
lose all the will in you....
My girl Hivee, has plans,
to make you hers,
hold you,
til she kills you....

My soulmate and maybe yours

Hivee

Be aware, today is Aids awareness day! Know the facts.
Hey Baby....That was 'real' Wow....Excellent, but I never expected less from you!
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Old 12-01-2005, 01:44 PM
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Re: My soulmate HiVee

respect TTNU, you come through !!
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Old 12-01-2005, 04:43 PM
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Re: My soulmate HiVee

TTNU thanks for making us all aware of HIV Awareness Week in your creative way.
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Old 12-01-2005, 06:48 PM
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Re: My soulmate HiVee

That's the real deal.
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very clever indeedy ....
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Old 12-02-2005, 01:07 AM
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Re: My soulmate HiVee

Quote:
Originally Posted by tonguetwistnu
Thanks so much for adding a twist to your signature!
Only you can wind me so tight with a twist of the tongue... and a few typed words...
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Old 02-07-2006, 09:08 AM
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Re: My soulmate HiVee

I saw this last night and rememeber that today is AIDS awareness day. Talk to you children people. They could be the next statistic.
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Re: My soulmate HiVee

Wow........Sorry I missed this before. Beautiful in that truly sad way.
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