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Old 07-25-2007, 03:41 PM
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Alone in a crowded space

I'm Alone
The music plays softly in my ear
He sits on my left
She sits on my right
Yet
I'm Alone



I'm Alone
Sitting here composing these words
listening to him on my left
watching her on my right
and
I'm Alone



I'm Alone
As the train pull smoothly into the station
He rises to leave on my left
She rises to leave on my right
and truly
I AM ALONE
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Old 03-21-2008, 04:08 PM
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Re: Alone in a crowded space

Jel why NOBODY responded to this????

Love it!
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Old 03-21-2008, 04:25 PM
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Re: Alone in a crowded space

it is nice...

and very true in this day and age... you can be surrounded by people and still be alone... nobody stops to smell the roses anymore.
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Jel why NOBODY responded to this????

Love it!

Because they were alone in their own thoughts.....!!!
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Old 03-21-2008, 04:50 PM
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lol... Jel I am never alone these days...
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Old 03-21-2008, 05:07 PM
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lol... Jel I am never alone these days...

you joining the schizoid clan????

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Re: Alone in a crowded space

I am also alone Surrounded by people but still lonely ah rassss
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The happiest of people don't necessarily have the best of everything; they just make the most of everything that comes along their way. The brightest future will always be based on a forgotten past; you can't go forward in life until you let go of your past failures and heartaches.


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you joining the schizoid clan????
LOL... a very active member Jel... but never fear... my feet are still planted firmly on the ground... and you will always be my dear friend.
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Old 07-09-2008, 12:26 PM
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Re: Alone in a crowded space

a 'guest' was just reading this...

thought I would bump it to show my brilliance!!!

thank you 'guest'!!!
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Old 07-09-2008, 12:28 PM
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LOL toot toot your horn gurl.
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I am also alone Surrounded by people but still lonely ah rassss
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LOL toot toot your horn gurl.
I would if I could reach.... but then again my need for a man would be obliterated too!!!!

can't you just see me rolling around the room giggling into my wet face!!!

lololol
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Old 07-09-2008, 12:31 PM
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Rotflmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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