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Old 07-21-2007, 08:28 AM
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tonguetwistnu nah do too bad.
Salt on open wounds(Inter-net pimps apology)

After taste like black n milds on breath the next morning

queezy, like morning sickness in the 5th week

irritating, like cramping pains on a monthly ritual

emptiness, like going all day without eating

withdrawls, the shaking and quivering of cravings for something,

as if you stop taking crack.

Infected, the verbal desease I put to your mind, body and soul

when lying through tungs, saying I love you

after I said I love you. (Lies)

I'm not the only one (you think),

but I keep trying to fight to be the only one, (you say)

Obsession to have it all like King Louis the Vlll

but not willing to admitt that others exists.

my lines in constant lies bring even the bitter truth through

satans eyes.

So I continue to spin my web of deciet.

Laying out my bait for you to eat

then sucking away your soul while

stripping you of your precious.

Bite into my forbidden fruit

change the laws of your spiritual will

the serpant has once again arisen

leaving red blood cells dying, to the approach of a black heart

thats eternally ill

I'm a marking of your bodily territories

you belong to me at even the longest of distance

I continue to inject you with every idea of you being selfishly my number one

I can't break these habbits

i try staying away so I don't continue with my plague

but as long as I have a thought in my senseless mind

and a sword cutting pen that disburses it writings in red

I will continue to hype the minds of the innocents,

violating the trust of mental virginities

and adding trophies on a corrupted life

of inter-net fantasies.

I'm the future of your inflicted damages

I apologize for being...........................



SALT ON OPEN WOUNDS



LeRoy Goetzendanner

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Old 09-09-2008, 09:59 PM
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GhettoGurl a gwaan wid tings.GhettoGurl a gwaan wid tings.
Re: Salt on open wounds(Inter-net pimps apology)

OMG, so they exist?
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